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Militarists
- Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 15:14, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
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Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:27, 8 June 2022 (UTC)- UberSoldat93
(talk) 12:30, 10 June 2022 (UTC) 
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 07:48, 15 June 2022 (UTC)- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 07:29, 16 June 2022 (UTC)
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CC-8
Rim-based planets needs a tad more context, as in none of the Rims are mentioned earlier in the article- I was describing the Loyalist faction, not the Militarists.
- What I'm meaning is that there's currently no context for what a Rim-based planet is, just needs to say something about the Rims being most of the central regions of the galaxy, or you just list the Rims being referred to there.
- The specific region(s) being referred to by "Rim" is not clarified. It's changed anyways.
- What I'm meaning is that there's currently no context for what a Rim-based planet is, just needs to say something about the Rims being most of the central regions of the galaxy, or you just list the Rims being referred to there.
- I was describing the Loyalist faction, not the Militarists.
The Republic part of the comic titles was applied retroactively, so that shouldn't be included in the BTS wording here. I've written some other articles from that arc as examples on how to format it.Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:00, 3 June 2022 (UTC)- Is that fine? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 14:46, 3 June 2022 (UTC)
- Nearly there, still shouldn't be referring to the whole series as Star Wars: Republic Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:41, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Very well. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 16:16, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Nearly there, still shouldn't be referring to the whole series as Star Wars: Republic Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:41, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Is that fine? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 14:46, 3 June 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Marvel citations are preferred instead of Dark Horse as they are the current license holder and have more precise dates.UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:12, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- Done. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 15:56, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
Braha
"the Militarists became part of the Loyalist faction, which was also composed of idealists and threatened planets based in the Rim regions." The way I'm reading this, also suggests that the latter descriptions apply to the Militarists as well, which if true should be established earlier in the article.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 21:12, 13 June 2022 (UTC)- It's referring to the Loyalists. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 23:22, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
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Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:07, 17 June 2022 (UTC)