Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Meiloorun Juice

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Meiloorun Juice

• Nominated by: Immi Thrax (talk) 14:03, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: WHY is this apparently a Disneyland-exclusive?!
• WookieeProject (optional): WookieeProject: Galaxy's Edge

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Support

1. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:59, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
2. Dentface (talk) 02:22, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
3. Nice work. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:16, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
4. Liverpool92 04:27, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
5. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:22, 24 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• In the first paragraph, I'd wright "for consumption by humans(ref 1) and Clawdites(ref 2)". It's just small thing to make the article more consistent. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:25, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done! Immi Thrax (talk) 15:27, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
• You have a case of double-linking for Star Wars: Galaxy's Edge (in the BTS). LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:31, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Whoops, meant to be a comic series link--fixed! Immi Thrax (talk) 16:25, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
• Why didn't you hyperlink Meiloorun fruit in the BTS?
  • Legends Meiloorun was an oversight, fixed! Canon isn't because it's linked in the very first sentence of the article body and would be considered a duplicate link. Immi Thrax (talk)
• I'd also specify in which episode of Rebels it was introduced. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:55, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done! Immi Thrax (talk) 18:08, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
    • It's missing date of realse. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:36, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Done. Immi Thrax (talk) 19:20, 16 August 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni Juice

• Do we actually see a Clawdite drink the juice, or is it just offered like Ronto Wrap? If the latter, I don't think we should assume that Clawdites can drink it.
  • Hmmm... The Clawdite specifically requested the juice by name, so I assumed he wouldn't order something he couldn't drink. I suppose he could've just ordered it to try it and not known if he actually could consume it. What do you think? Immi Thrax (talk) 21:19, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Agreed, and striking after EC conversation.
• If the green coloring is a mistake, it shouldn't be mentioned in the IU body.
  • Removed!
• The last paragraph of the bts really doesn't seem necessary for this article, it can all be added to the meiloorun fruit page instead. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:46, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Snipped the bit about Legends, but left the information about the juice being inspired by the fruit and the fruit's introduction, as removing the detail about the Rebels episode would conflict with a prior objection to add it. How would you like me to address that? Immi Thrax (talk) 21:19, 20 August 2021 (UTC)

Dent

• You mention that the drink's a Disneyland exclusive. Could you make that more explicit in the BTS section? Might be helpful for people who are researching what drinks are available at what park. Dentface (talk) 20:08, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
  • How's that? Immi Thrax (talk) 21:59, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• Could use some context for Ronto Roasters Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:47, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Context added! Immi Thrax (talk) 04:25, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 03:29, 24 August 2021 (UTC)