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MedStar-class frigate
- Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 00:16, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I'm going to jinx this nomination by wishing for an image to be released sometime :P
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OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 20:25, 12 May 2021 (UTC)- Liverpool92
22:25, 12 May 2021 (UTC) - JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 22:31, 12 May 2021 (UTC) - Erebus Chronus (Talk) 21:09, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:26, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
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OOM
Republic Navy is infobox-exclusive- Added --Vitus InfinitusTalk 20:12, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
I'm not sure whether "against" is the right word here. Does the source say that? If not then the sentence should be reworded.OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 19:52, 12 May 2021 (UTC)- Fixed --Vitus InfinitusTalk 20:12, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
"...during the Clone Wars between the Galactic Republic and the Confederacy of Independent Systems,[1] which lasted from 22 BBY to 19 BBY." Dangling participle.UberSoldat93(talk) 19:39, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
- Think I fixed it --Vitus InfinitusTalk 20:02, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
- Nope, the wording implies the Confederacy lasted from 22 to 19 BBY, not the Clone Wars. UberSoldat93
(talk) 12:40, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
- Okay, I restructured the sentence. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:17, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
- Nope, the wording implies the Confederacy lasted from 22 to 19 BBY, not the Clone Wars. UberSoldat93
- Think I fixed it --Vitus InfinitusTalk 20:02, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:27, 26 May 2021 (UTC)