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Marilena Pet-and-Ella Alda Mattea
- Nominated by: Jade Moonstroller (talk) 00:45, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: My second nom from Star Wars: The Rebel Files, probably more to come.
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Support
- VergenceScatter (talk) 14:45, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:54, 8 October 2022 (UTC)- Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:21, 8 October 2022 (UTC)
- Samonic
(Talk) 10:36, 8 October 2022 (UTC) 
Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:59, 8 October 2022 (UTC)
Object
Samonic
Is Mattea really a commander or is she a commanding officer? If so, please change the commander link to commanding officer.- Nope, they are a commander. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 17:07, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
Can we get a better image?- The image was added by Rsand 30 and is digital, probably the best we're gonna get. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 17:07, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
Context for Lorrd.- Done. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 05:54, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
Missing link to hair and eye.Samonic 08:49, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
- Okay. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 17:07, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
Vergence
Please describe what Mattea is wearing in her picture.VergenceScatter (talk) 23:26, 9 September 2022 (UTC)- Okay, thanks. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 05:54, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead
You can include that the classified datafile listing Mattea was sent by Draven to Leia. I've managed to narrow down the date for this as between 5 BBY and 4 BBY since the previous document states the Mission to free Wookiee prisoners has already occurred and the next one is an after-action report of the Action at Mustafar. You might be able to narrow it down to just 4 BBY, but I'm not sure which Rebels event the disabling of the Star Destroyer is refering to on the previous page.Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:15, 16 September 2022 (UTC)- That would be Draven to Mothma. I will also look into narrowing down the date ref more specifically tomorrow. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 05:54, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
- Sorted a date note. Couldn't spot any event that could date it more accurately. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:54, 8 October 2022 (UTC)
- That would be Draven to Mothma. I will also look into narrowing down the date ref more specifically tomorrow. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 05:54, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
I'd also mention that it was during the reign of the Galactic Empire and that the report was on major resistance factions operating in Imperial space.Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:15, 16 September 2022 (UTC)- Okay. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 05:54, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
You can include context on the Rebel Files and the fact that they were compiled by 34 ABY.Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:15, 16 September 2022 (UTC)- What that be something for the BTS section or will that work in the Body? Jade Moonstroller (talk) 05:54, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
- In the body you can say something like "The Rebel Files, a collection of documents from throughout the Alliance's history that had been compiled by 34 ABY." or something similar. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:08, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
- 4 ABY is a more accurate date for this. I've implemented accordingly. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:54, 8 October 2022 (UTC)
- In the body you can say something like "The Rebel Files, a collection of documents from throughout the Alliance's history that had been compiled by 34 ABY." or something similar. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:08, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
- What that be something for the BTS section or will that work in the Body? Jade Moonstroller (talk) 05:54, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
Artist credits are in the back of the book. Adrián Rodriguez drew the ones on page 16.Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:15, 16 September 2022 (UTC)- Okay. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 05:54, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
Braha
You'll need a different source to call Lorrd an astronomical object. If you look at just Rebel Files, you can call it a location at best.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 12:23, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
You can add a quote from IU "The Rebel Files". You can check Stalnus or Kikla for examples. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:27, 24 September 2022 (UTC)- In progress Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 22:25, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- There's no available quotes relevant enough to Mattea in the book. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:54, 8 October 2022 (UTC)
- In progress Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 22:25, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
Source missing, noticed from Daniel Wallace's article: https://www.starwars.com/news/rebel-files-book-interview . Sometimes its worth checking articles relating to the media in case previews show something. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:27, 24 September 2022 (UTC)- Updated but you'll need to tweak the BTS, a bit hard from mobile Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 22:25, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- Rebel Files came out before that article, I've fixed accordingly. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:54, 8 October 2022 (UTC)
- Updated but you'll need to tweak the BTS, a bit hard from mobile Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 22:25, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:22, 8 October 2022 (UTC)
Vote to remove nomination (EC only)
- Multiple objections over 7 days old. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:41, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
- Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:52, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
