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Mar Ti Kam'Ron
- Nominated by: AmazinglyCool
(talk) 01:31, 13 June 2023 (UTC) - Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 15:33, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 214 words (0 introduction, 149 body, 65 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG
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Support
- Marvacian Archivist (talk) 14:07, 13 June 2023 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 21:38, 15 June 2023 (UTC)- JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:50, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
Supreme Emperor Holocomm 15:32, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
Object
Uber
Gonna need another citation for the name of the father.UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:35, 13 June 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:32, 13 June 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. AmazinglyCool
Lew
Is it stated that he carved his name in the stone and left the hat?Lewisr (talk) 20:07, 13 June 2023 (UTC)- No, I've adjusted the wording to be more accurate. AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:43, 13 June 2023 (UTC)
- No, I've adjusted the wording to be more accurate. AmazinglyCool
I think it would be better to reorder some things, so that it says Mar visited the spot several times throughout life first, and then say by 14 BBY a memorial had been placed at the spotLewisr (talk) 14:37, 14 June 2023 (UTC)- The databank infers that Kam’Ron visited his memorial. AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:52, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
- I read it to as him visiting the meditation site, and then the memorial is put at the spot as a reminder of it being that spot. Might be worth seeing what others think? Lewisr (talk) 15:14, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
- Try looking at this link Amazingly Cool, https://game-maps.com/SWJFO/Shattered-Lake.asp. This may help. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 18:31, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
- "A memorial placed at a meditation site often used by the venerable Jedi Master Mar Ti 'Bucky' Kam'Ron. He returned here many times over the course of his life to reflect on his adventures and achievements." It could suggest that either he returned to the meditation site or to his memorial. I would think it to mean the latter do to the "reflect on his adventures and achievements." AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:41, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
- "A memorial placed at a meditation site often used by the venerable Jedi Master Mar Ti 'Bucky' Kam'Ron. He returned here many times over the course of his life to reflect on his adventures and achievements." It could suggest that either he returned to the meditation site or to his memorial. I would think it to mean the latter do to the "reflect on his adventures and achievements." AmazinglyCool
- Try looking at this link Amazingly Cool, https://game-maps.com/SWJFO/Shattered-Lake.asp. This may help. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 18:31, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
- I read it to as him visiting the meditation site, and then the memorial is put at the spot as a reminder of it being that spot. Might be worth seeing what others think? Lewisr (talk) 15:14, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
- The databank infers that Kam’Ron visited his memorial. AmazinglyCool
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 15:32, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
- Had to remove the image since they should not interfere with the game template like that. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:35, 13 June 2023 (UTC)