Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Manari

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Manari

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Always happy to work out Atlas positions. Just ask in future. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:35, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Manoof (talk) 03:06, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 21:09, March 25, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:00, March 28, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 19:25, April 11, 2014 (UTC)

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Ayrehead
  1. You're going to need to go through the Essential Atlas and add the various factional regions of space it falls within. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:58, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
    • Urgh. I'm on it. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:01, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
      • Manari is never clearly shown as being part of anything, as the planet itself does not appear at all. Clone Commander Lee Talk 22:15, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
        • But you know where it is based on its grid coordinates and the Expansion region sectors map. For example pg. 150 shows that it fell within Republic space during the Clone Wars, since the whole area of grid its in is blue. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:20, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
          • Puuh, thanks. Should be done. Clone Commander Lee Talk 23:41, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
            • Pg 119 shows that the planet was in an area first widely explored between 20,000 BBY and 15,000 BBY. You'll need to reference specific pages for the other three factions as well. The Republic's on page 151 of TEA, Empire on pg 112 of the Essential Guide to Warfare, and Krayt's pg 137 of TEA. Don't forget all this in chronological order. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:59, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
              • Thanks for the assistance, I hate such stuff. Should be fine now. Clone Commander Lee Talk 00:33, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Grid coordinates our OOU so they shouldn't be in the main body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:58, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
    • You're sure? Is there some kind of guideline for this? Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:01, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
      • Yup, Jason Fry stated somewhere that they're OOU but I can't find exactly where right now. I don't think there's a layout guide, but if you look through the various other planetary status articles they all have the coordinates as infobox exclusive. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:19, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
  3. The Redlink needs to be made. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:58, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
  4. You need to use the specific reference template for TOR including the crafting mission its mentioned in. I'd probably also add that to the Bts. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:58, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
    • I know the mission, but is there a specific template? Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:16, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
      • Yup, fixed it for you. Mission could still use a mention in the bts though. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:24, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Context on the Clone Wars please.
  • Why is the Atlas Online Companion mentioned in the BTS? It only mentions systems.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 05:45, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
  • For the Atlas maps, I believe that we do not mention affiliation for planets in a given faction's space unless that planet appears on the map. The planet could be inside the government's space, but might not be directly controlled by that faction. It probably was, but there isn't any way to know for sure. The body of the article is fine since it is withing the space of those factions, but you should remove the affiliation fields from the infobox unless you can source them to another source. Please correct this for any of your other articles as well.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 15:30, March 29, 2014 (UTC)
  • The Essential Reader's Companion has a 19 BBY date for the novel. You will need a reference explaining the reasoning behind the 19.5 BBY date, which I assume isn't the primary date for the book.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 15:01, April 2, 2014 (UTC)
SE
  • Does the atlas state Manari was under the control of Darth Krayt's Galactic Empire? Or is it just within the area under their control? Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:54, March 27, 2014 (UTC)

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