Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Manaan/Canon

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Manaan/Canon

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7Crew Pit 21:10, June 23, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Hopefully we can get this over quickly.

(3 ECs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Squishy Vic | message 22:40, June 28, 2015 (UTC)
  2. Might want to mention Selkath are sentient but otherwise great. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:37, July 3, 2015 (UTC)
  3. Manoof (talk) 11:15, July 10, 2015 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 18:07, July 24, 2015 (UTC)
  5. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 13:54, August 12, 2015 (UTC)
  6. ECvote Exiled Jedi (talk) 14:21, August 22, 2015 (UTC)
  7. Imperators II(Talk) 08:03, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Object

Exiled Jedi
  • I would note that it was mentioned in the new databank as well in the BTS.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 12:18, June 28, 2015 (UTC)
  • Per Ayrehead's comment, I believe you should mention that the Selkath are sentient in the first sentence.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 14:08, July 3, 2015 (UTC)
    • Done. Also adjusted wording. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 12:27, July 10, 2015 (UTC)
  • I'm not sure if this is just the Manaan databank entry, but it refers to the plural of Selkath as "Selkaths." If this is always the case, you should change it in this article.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:08, July 26, 2015 (UTC)
    • In Mantu's SWE and Databank entries, the plural of Selkath is Selkath. I can change it to Selkaths if you would like, but I'd say that there is enough evidence to the contrary to keep it the way it is. - AV-6R7 (talk) 23:29, July 26, 2015 (UTC)
Vic
  • I think we need tiny bit of additional context on who Mantu is in the behind the scenes. Somewhere it should say why he's part of canon and where he came from (Clone Wars TV show). Also, I didn't want to make this edit myself but I'd recommend adding in "Star Wars canon" before "canon" in the BTS, as well.Squishy Vic | message 19:27, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

  • I will be taking a temporary hiatus for the next three weeks as I will be in Europe and may not always have a good internet connection. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 03:10, July 2, 2015 (UTC)