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Man-of-war
- Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi
(talk) 21:55, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: elizabeth swann voice FIRE ALLLLL
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- Let's hope I didn't miss any mentions. Samonic
(Talk) 17:25, 20 October 2022 (UTC) - Erebus Chronus (Talk) 01:00, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
- DFaceG (talk) 11:41, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:28, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 15:15, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
Object
Crofyp-of-war
Preliminaries- Please note Legends counterpart in the BTS.
- Source the BTS.
- Mention Ers'ikaro's Bellicose.
- I think Jixtus said something about man-of-wars.
- You should mention when man-of-wars were used.
- Specify when Ar'alani commanded the Vigilant.
- Missing links to engine, hyperdrive, commanding officer. Samonic
(Talk) 08:04, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
Second wave- Please specify when Ers'ikaro and Dy'lothe commanded their man-of-wars.
- Did Ar'alani command the Vigilant only in 19 BBY? Please reword, as she also commanded it around 18 BBY.
- A source isn't an appearance, but a mention, so the BTS part regarding the Heir to the Empire sourcebook must be reworded.
- Please mention Picket Force Six in both infobox and body.
- Please mention engines, laser turrets, electrostatic barriers, hull, escape pods, docking bays, etc. Some of these are infobox-exclusive as of now.
- Ers'ikaro and Dy'lothe aren't CEDF admirals, but CDF admirals. Chiss Defense Force should be linked instead of Chiss Expansionary Defense Force (Legends.)
- Do we know how long the man-of-wars were? Slightly smaller than the FateSpinner?
- Please specify that the man-of-wars first appeared in the current Star Wars canon when mentioning Chaos Rising. (You can check Yashuvhu for an example) Samonic
(Talk) 15:59, 24 September 2022 (UTC)
- done BloodOfIrizi
(talk) 17:36, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
- done BloodOfIrizi
More- Electrostatic barrier shouldn't be capitalized in the body.
- Underlinking: missing links to hull, deflector shield, standard year and weapon.
- We don't know if ar'alani stopped commanding her nigthdragon between 19-18 bby, please reword.
- Can you say that the breachers were missiles? "breacher missiles" will do.
- Publisher for HTTE sourcebook, please.
- Please remove the apostrophe. "man-of-war's"
- Engines and hyperdrives are infobox-exclusive. Samonic
(Talk) 18:49, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
- all done BloodOfIrizi
(talk) 00:07, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- all done BloodOfIrizi
We don't know if the Firewolf, groundlion, and Nightdragon are classes of man-of-war. You can just say "types," since they aren't named "Firewolf-class man-of-war," for example.Samonic
(Talk) 11:04, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
- fixed BloodOfIrizi
(talk) 18:31, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
- fixed BloodOfIrizi
Braha
If I'm not wrong, everything in the affiliations is part of the Chiss Ascendancy. They shouldn't be listed outside of that.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 17:44, 15 October 2022 (UTC)- fixed BloodOfIrizi
(talk) 22:27, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
- fixed BloodOfIrizi
Manoof
Can we get an external link and BTS mention of the real-world naval ship classification Man-of-war? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:21, 23 October 2022 (UTC)- done BloodOfIrizi
(talk) 13:01, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
- done BloodOfIrizi
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 15:15, 24 October 2022 (UTC)