Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Man-of-war

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Man-of-war

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi (talk) 21:55, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: elizabeth swann voice FIRE ALLLLL
• WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Novels Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Chiss

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Support

1. Let's hope I didn't miss any mentions. Samonic ^(Talk) 17:25, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
2. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 01:00, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
3. DFaceG (talk) 11:41, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
4. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:28, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
5. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 15:15, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

Object

Crofyp-of-war

• Preliminaries
  • Please note Legends counterpart in the BTS.
  • Source the BTS.
  • Mention Ers'ikaro's Bellicose.
  • I think Jixtus said something about man-of-wars.
  • You should mention when man-of-wars were used.
  • Specify when Ar'alani commanded the Vigilant.
  • Missing links to engine, hyperdrive, commanding officer. Samonic ^(Talk) 08:04, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
• Second wave
  • Please specify when Ers'ikaro and Dy'lothe commanded their man-of-wars.
  • Did Ar'alani command the Vigilant only in 19 BBY? Please reword, as she also commanded it around 18 BBY.
  • A source isn't an appearance, but a mention, so the BTS part regarding the Heir to the Empire sourcebook must be reworded.
  • Please mention Picket Force Six in both infobox and body.
  • Please mention engines, laser turrets, electrostatic barriers, hull, escape pods, docking bays, etc. Some of these are infobox-exclusive as of now.
  • Ers'ikaro and Dy'lothe aren't CEDF admirals, but CDF admirals. Chiss Defense Force should be linked instead of Chiss Expansionary Defense Force (Legends.)
  • Do we know how long the man-of-wars were? Slightly smaller than the FateSpinner?
  • Please specify that the man-of-wars first appeared in the current Star Wars canon when mentioning Chaos Rising. (You can check Yashuvhu for an example) Samonic ^(Talk) 15:59, 24 September 2022 (UTC)
    • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 17:36, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
• More
  • Electrostatic barrier shouldn't be capitalized in the body.
  • Underlinking: missing links to hull, deflector shield, standard year and weapon.
  • We don't know if ar'alani stopped commanding her nigthdragon between 19-18 bby, please reword.
  • Can you say that the breachers were missiles? "breacher missiles" will do.
  • Publisher for HTTE sourcebook, please.
  • Please remove the apostrophe. "man-of-war's"
  • Engines and hyperdrives are infobox-exclusive. Samonic ^(Talk) 18:49, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
    • all done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 00:07, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
• We don't know if the Firewolf, groundlion, and Nightdragon are classes of man-of-war. You can just say "types," since they aren't named "Firewolf-class man-of-war," for example. Samonic ^(Talk) 11:04, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
  • fixed BloodOfIrizi (talk) 18:31, 19 October 2022 (UTC)

Braha

• If I'm not wrong, everything in the affiliations is part of the Chiss Ascendancy. They shouldn't be listed outside of that. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 17:44, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
  • fixed BloodOfIrizi (talk) 22:27, 15 October 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• Can we get an external link and BTS mention of the real-world naval ship classification Man-of-war? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:21, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 13:01, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 15:15, 24 October 2022 (UTC)