Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Malsarr

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Malsarr

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 13:28, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 01:07, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 183 words (0 introduction, 121 body, 62 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 183 words (0 introduction, 121 body, 62 behind the scenes)
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(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 14:25, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
  2. CometSmudge (talk) 03:26, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Wok142 (talk) 21:40, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
  4. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 01:04, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

Object

Wok
  • Very minor but in the infobox, I think the Use(s) section should either read "electronics manufacturing" or "manufacture of electronics" Wok142 (talk) 03:57, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
    • But "manufacturing" and "manufacture" are synonyms... Imperators II(Talk) 07:14, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
      • To me it would read better in either of the ways I suggested but that's just my opinion, it's not wrong the way it currently is as you said. It can be left as is. Wok142 (talk) 21:40, 20 June 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:04, 22 June 2024 (UTC)