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Mag Zaroff
- Nominated by: Marvacian Archivist (talk) 12:37, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 17:09, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 244 words (0 introduction, 87 body, 157 behind the scenes)
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Support
Lewisr (talk) 18:40, 27 July 2023 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 16:35, 30 July 2023 (UTC)
- —SnowedLightning (they/them) 13:56, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
- Fan26 (Talk) 17:07, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
Object
Lew
Mag isn't referred to as a female, and you'll need to do a pronouns updateLewisr (talk) 14:09, 29 June 2023 (UTC)'Described as calm and confident' No one IU actually described her that way, so you'll need to reword that bit so it's more in line with what the book saysHumanoid is infobox exclusiveDo we know she is actually associated with the Empire?Lewisr (talk) 14:18, 29 June 2023 (UTC)- All done. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 17:08, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
- The first wasn't really completely addressed, the body still refers to her as a female and has the category, you'll also need to include the pronouns in the infobox and categorise. And you still have the Empire themed infobox Lewisr (talk) 03:52, 6 July 2023 (UTC)
- Ignore the point about the Empire themed infobox, had an oops and missed the Imperial crest, feel free to restore prior info regarding her being affiliated with the Empire Lewisr (talk) 04:42, 6 July 2023 (UTC)
- All done and addressed. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 16:04, 8 July 2023 (UTC)
- The wrong pronouns are being used, please take a look and use what is actually used in the book Lewisr (talk) 16:23, 8 July 2023 (UTC)
- Yep just checked the book and she is referred to as a female so made changes accordingly. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 05:20, 9 July 2023 (UTC)
- The character isn't referred to as a female, they just use she/her pronouns for her Lewisr (talk) 04:17, 11 July 2023 (UTC)
- How about now? Marvacian Archivist (talk) 10:50, 11 July 2023 (UTC)
- The character isn't referred to as a female, they just use she/her pronouns for her Lewisr (talk) 04:17, 11 July 2023 (UTC)
- Yep just checked the book and she is referred to as a female so made changes accordingly. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 05:20, 9 July 2023 (UTC)
- The wrong pronouns are being used, please take a look and use what is actually used in the book Lewisr (talk) 16:23, 8 July 2023 (UTC)
- All done and addressed. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 16:04, 8 July 2023 (UTC)
- Ignore the point about the Empire themed infobox, had an oops and missed the Imperial crest, feel free to restore prior info regarding her being affiliated with the Empire Lewisr (talk) 04:42, 6 July 2023 (UTC)
- The first wasn't really completely addressed, the body still refers to her as a female and has the category, you'll also need to include the pronouns in the infobox and categorise. And you still have the Empire themed infobox Lewisr (talk) 03:52, 6 July 2023 (UTC)
- All done. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 17:08, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
The release dates for the art book and game itself will need proper referencing instead of just citing to the art bookLewisr (talk) 16:26, 8 July 2023 (UTC)- Addressed. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 05:20, 9 July 2023 (UTC)
I think the art by Gustavo Mendonca could be described as it includes some armor etcLewisr (talk) 18:06, 24 July 2023 (UTC)- Alright so I checked the concept art and have included in the article a description of her armour. I have checked the other concept art and it depicts her in the same clothes as the picture in the article so I haven't included it in.Marvacian Archivist (talk) 06:42, 26 July 2023 (UTC)
AC
You should mention the art book in the BTS since its listed as the first mention of the character in your sources.AmazinglyCool
(talk) 00:40, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- Done. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 05:20, 9 July 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:07, 3 August 2023 (UTC)