Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Lynos IV

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Lynos IV

Nominated by: Zed42 (talk) 22:03, January 1, 2019 (UTC)
Nomination comments: As it's my first nomination, I chose a throwaway location name that will probably never be mentioned again.

Nice work for your first nomination! Imperators II^(Talk) 23:38, January 1, 2019 (UTC)
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:46, January 1, 2019 (UTC)
Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 10:35, January 2, 2019 (UTC)
grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 19:14, January 2, 2019 (UTC)
Tommy Macaroni 19:22, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

~~Full release date, please. Note this will almost certainly need to be referenced to something other than the comic.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 23:21, January 1, 2019 (UTC)
- Added. Zed42 (talk) 23:28, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

"involving the resort manager Zefin Tuzo on Lynos IV." — This reads as if Zefin Tuzo was the resort manager on Lynos IV (suggesting there was a resort at that location), but the comic is only clear that she is a resort manager on Marquinn, and we don't know what she was doing with Han and Chewie on Lynos IV. Could this be reworded slightly to be clearer as to where we know she was a resort manager? Nice work on your first nom! grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 08:46, January 2, 2019 (UTC)
- Yeah, I didn't mean for it to seem that way, the wording of that sentence is fixed now. And thanks! Zed42 (talk) 09:59, January 2, 2019 (UTC)