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Lusankya
- Nominated by: Loqiical (talk) 00:21, 28 December 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: The source doesn't actually call it a star dreadnought
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Assuming Shay's objection will be addressed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:43, 3 January 2023 (UTC)- UberSoldat93
(talk) 15:48, 4 January 2023 (UTC) 
Manoof (he/him/his) 22:59, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
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UberSoldat
Please provide full dates for the novels.UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:03, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
First visual depiction in BTS as well.UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:59, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
- Done. What's the difference between the 1 october and 1 september dates? Loqiical (talk) 01:25, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
- Also do we mean to have 1996 linked twice Loqiical (talk) 01:28, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
- It shouldn't be, got it in my copy edit Manoof (he/him/his) 05:47, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
- Penguin is far more reliable when it comes to dates, Amazon has had approximate or even incorrect dates listed for old sources on many occasions. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:46, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
- Penguin is far more reliable when it comes to dates, Amazon has had approximate or even incorrect dates listed for old sources on many occasions. UberSoldat93
- It shouldn't be, got it in my copy edit Manoof (he/him/his)
Please include illustrator(s) and writer(s) for the comic issue.UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:46, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
Manoof
It seems there is information out of chronological order, can the last two sentences be switched so it flows. Additionally you can mention the destruction of its sister ship Manoof (he/him/his) 05:47, 3 January 2023 (UTC)- We don't know the chronology so I've left it in the order in which the BMF 27 talks about the topic. Loqiical (talk) 00:04, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
- Looking at the Executor article, it was in final stage of development at Kuat and then given to Vader to use shortly after the battle of Yavin. The construction at fondor must have taken place prior to this, and thus prior to the battle of Yavin, hence the construction note should be before the mention of the battle of Yavin. Manoof (he/him/his) 02:56, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
- Is this Darth Vader (2015) 20? If the chronology is not clear I can just get rid of the second sentence since it's not very important. Loqiical (talk) 10:44, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
- Had a closer look and yeah, while the conclusion could be reached it does rely on a bit of assumptions around the timing, so striking. I think the sentence is pertinent to the article so should be kept :) Manoof (he/him/his) 22:59, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
- Had a closer look and yeah, while the conclusion could be reached it does rely on a bit of assumptions around the timing, so striking. I think the sentence is pertinent to the article so should be kept :) Manoof (he/him/his)
- Is this Darth Vader (2015) 20? If the chronology is not clear I can just get rid of the second sentence since it's not very important. Loqiical (talk) 10:44, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
- Looking at the Executor article, it was in final stage of development at Kuat and then given to Vader to use shortly after the battle of Yavin. The construction at fondor must have taken place prior to this, and thus prior to the battle of Yavin, hence the construction note should be before the mention of the battle of Yavin. Manoof (he/him/his)
- We don't know the chronology so I've left it in the order in which the BMF 27 talks about the topic. Loqiical (talk) 00:04, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
The origin of the name is also pertinent to this version and should be noted Manoof (he/him/his) 05:47, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
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Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 02:13, 5 January 2023 (UTC)