Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Luona

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Luona

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 23:40, January 14, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: creepy gal....

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Support

  1. ECvote You got that right. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:21, January 15, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Ahhh! I've got to get away, fighting the Empire is better than this!--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 14:04, January 18, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. Exiled Jedi
    • "Due to this, the individual left and joined the crew of the EF76 Nebulon-B escort frigate Far Orbit, a privateering vessel working for the Alliance to Restore the Republic after it mutinied from under the Galactic Empire's control, when the ship docked at the station looking for crew." Please reword this sentence; it seems to say that the Alliance mutinied.
    • The BTS makes it sound like Pirates & Privateers followed the crew of the Far Orbit.
    • "She was mentioned under the "Avoiding a social misunderstanding" part of a section that..." I think there's an extra word or a missing word in there somewhere. Could you rework the sentence for better flow?--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 05:25, January 15, 2013 (UTC)
      • All taken care of. Thanks for looking it over. 501st dogma(talk) 21:35, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

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