Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/LothalNet

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LothalNet

• Nominated by: AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 09:15, March 11, 2018 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A nom I've had in my pocket for a good while now. Let's get back in the CAn game!

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Sorry about the confusion in the objections.—Tommy-Macaroni ^{(TAKE A SEAT)} 19:48, March 16, 2018 (UTC)
2. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:39, March 20, 2018 (UTC)
3. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 09:49, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
4. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:03, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
5. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:57, April 9, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Tommy

• You should remove the Amazon links, and just source the years of release to the product ref itself.
  • I talked it over with, I want to say Ayrehead, and they said full release dates are fine when multiple sources that were released within the same year are being mentioned in the Bts. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 09:42, March 11, 2018 (UTC)
    • Oh okay, fair enough.—Tommy-Macaroni ^{(TAKE A SEAT)} 09:43, March 11, 2018 (UTC)
• Maybe say about Ezra living in the tower.
• Could you say that by 5 BBY, Ezra's tower was derelict?—Tommy-Macaroni ^{(TAKE A SEAT)} 09:39, March 11, 2018 (UTC)
  • Do we want to say he had taken up residence in the tower by 5 BBY, or that it had been abandoned by then? I'll put what you intitially requested in for now. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:51, March 16, 2018 (UTC)
    • Yeah, saying both is best, although you now need to remove the Ezra link in the quote.
• You should remove the full dates in the BTS and just have the year soured the the product itself.—Tommy-Macaroni ^{(TAKE A SEAT)} 19:45, March 16, 2018 (UTC)
  • I'm very forgetful.—Tommy-Macaroni ^{(TAKE A SEAT)} 19:45, March 16, 2018 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

• I think you need to establish the timeline for LothalNet's fall into disuse directly instead of Ezra's residence. "until it was supplanted by a more advanced Imperial network by the year 5 BBY." You also might want to split up the first sentence after this as it's getting rather long. 1358 ^(Talk) 12:29, April 2, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 23:56, April 6, 2018 (UTC)

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