Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/LothalNet

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Contents

  • 1 LothalNet
    • 1.1 (3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Tommy
        • 1.1.2.2 Ecks Dee
      • 1.1.3 Comments

LothalNet

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7Crew Pit 09:15, March 11, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A nom I've had in my pocket for a good while now. Let's get back in the CAn game!

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Sorry about the confusion in the objections.—Tommy-Macaroni Imperial Emblem (TAKE A SEAT) 19:48, March 16, 2018 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 15:39, March 20, 2018 (UTC)
  3. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 09:49, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:03, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 18:57, April 9, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Tommy
  • You should remove the Amazon links, and just source the years of release to the product ref itself.
    • I talked it over with, I want to say Ayrehead, and they said full release dates are fine when multiple sources that were released within the same year are being mentioned in the Bts. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 09:42, March 11, 2018 (UTC)
      • Oh okay, fair enough.—Tommy-Macaroni Imperial Emblem (TAKE A SEAT) 09:43, March 11, 2018 (UTC)
  • Maybe say about Ezra living in the tower.
  • Could you say that by 5 BBY, Ezra's tower was derelict?—Tommy-Macaroni Imperial Emblem (TAKE A SEAT) 09:39, March 11, 2018 (UTC)
    • Do we want to say he had taken up residence in the tower by 5 BBY, or that it had been abandoned by then? I'll put what you intitially requested in for now. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 03:51, March 16, 2018 (UTC)
      • Yeah, saying both is best, although you now need to remove the Ezra link in the quote.
  • You should remove the full dates in the BTS and just have the year soured the the product itself.—Tommy-Macaroni Imperial Emblem (TAKE A SEAT) 19:45, March 16, 2018 (UTC)
    • I'm very forgetful.—Tommy-Macaroni Imperial Emblem (TAKE A SEAT) 19:45, March 16, 2018 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • I think you need to establish the timeline for LothalNet's fall into disuse directly instead of Ezra's residence. "until it was supplanted by a more advanced Imperial network by the year 5 BBY." You also might want to split up the first sentence after this as it's getting rather long. 1358 (Talk) 12:29, April 2, 2018 (UTC)
    • Done. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 23:56, April 6, 2018 (UTC)

Comments