Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Lord Umbriss' estate

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Lord Umbriss' estate

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 14:57, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: You guys are so picky.

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Support

1. Hey, its my job.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:06, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:03, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
3. Winterz (talk) 21:46, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
4. Tinwe^(comlink) 08:50, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. The first sentence seems kinda awkward with the "but its was taken from him..." part. Split the sentence or reword to make it sound better. 501st dogma^(talk) 19:14, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
   • Fixed. Cade Calrayn 20:34, August 22, 2012 (UTC)

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