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Little red moon over Buna
- Nominated by: Stake black msg 06:13, 13 September 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 03:44, 18 September 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 176 words (0 introduction, 154 body, 22 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 153 words (0 introduction, 131 body, 22 behind the scenes)
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CometSmudge (talk) 15:27, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
copy-edit (of note that manual — should always be —instead.—spookywillowwtalk 23:40, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 03:43, 18 September 2025 (UTC)
Objections
Comet
It would be better to give the Ronin more context than just him being an individual (Usually I go with former Sith)Crimson is a specific type of red, and based on the information we have, we don't know if crimson is an accurate description of the moonI think Buna should be given context as an astronomical objectCometSmudge (talk) 00:09, 14 September 2025 (UTC)- Addressed. Stake black msg 04:51, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
Lew
I feel that it was countered as hearsay is relevant to noteLewisr (talk) 03:00, 17 September 2025 (UTC)- I tried to tweak it in a way so that the hearsay part is not at the end of the sentence and thus emphasized, since the events of the story imply the aunty's accounts were true. Stake black msg 01:05, 18 September 2025 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 03:43, 18 September 2025 (UTC)