Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Lill

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Lill

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:44, July 4, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Thought I'd return to some of the first articles I ever created.

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 12:04, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Add a lil lill here, and a lil lill there... 501st dogma(talk) 14:18, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote ^You may be onto something there, dogma. Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 20:45, July 29, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Spend less time thinking of jokes and more time in your reviews, guys. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 01:18, August 29, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:25, September 3, 2014 (UTC)
  6. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:07, September 3, 2014 (UTC)

Object

SE
  • Does the source say Lill is native to Lianna? Or just that the cuisine it was used in was native to the planet?
    • It says a "native puree of lill" which I took to mean the lill was native but I guess that the puree could be? Also added in the word puree. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:14, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
  • Can you reword the last sentence of the bio a bit? As is, it drags a bit imo. Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:04, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
  • Does the source state it is a spice? Or just that it was a strong flavor in it? Supreme Emperor (talk) 16:51, July 17, 2014 (UTC)
    • I was certain it did say it but looking through again I can't find it anywhere. Changed to additive. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:04, July 17, 2014 (UTC)
  • There is some more info you can add from the Lola Curich Starport section of Mission to Lianna. Specifically it mentions Lill being coupled with potted meats, VegHash and cereals. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:05, July 31, 2014 (UTC)
    • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:40, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
      • There is still more information missing from the Galactic Gourmet's Galaxy Guide section. Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:03, August 8, 2014 (UTC)
        • Added I think. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:43, August 15, 2014 (UTC)
          • Bit more on page 12 of Mission to Lianna, last sentence of the Galactic Gourmet's Galaxy Guide section. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:32, August 24, 2014 (UTC)
            • Done? Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:28, August 25, 2014 (UTC)
              • There's also a bit about native cuisine being stuffed in a grain and choya shell, worth mentioning? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:32, August 29, 2014 (UTC)
                • Oh, I didn't include that as it didn't explicitly state lill was used in those but I've added it now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:34, August 29, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • Watch your spelling, please. favored is the American English version.
    • Hopefully the spell check change will stop that happening again. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:28, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
  • Please look at your use of punctuation and quotation marks.
    • Should I remove the quotation marks? I'm not sure what our rule on them is. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:28, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
      • Punctuation always goes within quotation marks, even if the quote itself doesn't have the punctuation. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 18:52, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
  • While it's not outright harmful, please don't capitalize era tags.
  • It's clear that you didn't reload the infobox, since there are still hide parameters. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 15:40, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
    • Those are still in the standard load for the food infobox. Should I remove them? Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:28, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
  • "making it rather unpleasant." What is "it"? There are several things there. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 16:47, August 5, 2014 (UTC)
  • "the taste as..." same issue here. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 16:47, August 5, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Nothing in the article body establishes that the article subject existed during the Rebellion era.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 04:58, August 15, 2014 (UTC)
  • If the source gives any information on the primary species living on Lianna, you should add this information to the article. As it is Liann cuisine, the primary species would eat it.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 20:38, August 18, 2014 (UTC)
    • I've added Human to the infobox and said that Lianna was Human populated in the article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:28, August 25, 2014 (UTC)
Lee
  • Well, well, five people missed this, so I have to spoil the party. 201 words, needs sectioning. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:31, September 3, 2014 (UTC)
    • Done. Not entirely sure if some of the stuff in history should be moved to description, but since its the opinions of publications I left it there for now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:59, September 3, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (EC only)

  1. ECvote Idle, unaddressed objection over one week old. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:25, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 04:27, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvoteSupreme Emperor (talk) 04:31, August 7, 2014 (UTC)