Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Laser-sniper

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Laser-sniper

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:21, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A nice and simple sub-nom to Glunge

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 18:44, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 17:05, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:04, 1 May 2021 (UTC)
  4. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:16, 2 May 2021 (UTC)
  5. CT-1742 Clone Army patch (talk) 18:20, 2 May 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • Sniper links to the role, not a type of weapon, which makes my head hurt thinking about why the authors named it so. Unless there's other weapons called snipers I think those references should be changed to describe it as a rifle, as the category does. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:00, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Personally I think the intro should refer to it in singular instead of plural. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:11, 2 May 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • Reposting from this GAN: The ref note for the Battle of Yavin doesn't mention the battle. I also think it's unnecessary to mention the GCW. "Shortly after the Battle of Yavin" gives enough context OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 16:38, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Reworded the ref and removed the GCW mention. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:46, 30 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:14, 3 May 2021 (UTC)