Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/LA-233

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LA-233

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D MCCG (chat) 01:06, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
I cleaned up the human note per your RS-2112. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 06:31, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
LucaRoR ^(Talk) 06:58, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:07, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:34, 14 September 2021 (UTC)

~~We avoid using "they" for beings of unidentified gender. (In the refernce)~~
- Fixed
~~Context for the First Order?~~
- We don't usually add that but ok
"The stormtrooper along with the 709th Legion was deployed to occupy the planet Batuu at around 34 ABY." The first part of the senetnce should be referenced to the Datapad, only the date should be refernced to the date note. Also, according to the screenshot in the refernce nothing specifies that the stormtrooper was on Batuu, am I missing something? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:17, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
- The point of the datapad is to give the guest at Galaxy's Edge a chance to see and interact with what is going on at Black Spire Outpost.--Liverpool92 02:29, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
~~I'm not sure, but maybe a paragraph-breal?~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:50, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
- Do you mean a paragraph break?--Liverpool92 02:54, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
  - Yep, but I realised it isn't needed after all. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:03, 11 September 2021 (UTC)

~~Please use {{DatapadCite}} for your referencing here as well as on your other Datapad trooper(s).~~ JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:42, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
- Done for all.--Liverpool92 02:58, 11 September 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 10:34, 14 September 2021 (UTC)