Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/L'ain Freefall

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L'ain Freefall

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 20:05, March 25, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Been awhile; let's hop back in.

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Anil
  • Are you sure her first name is spelled as "Lain"? Her Twitter and Facebook accounts, also this interview spells it as "L'ain."
  • I don't think there is need for a scroll box as there is only one Filmography entry.
  • In the ref 2, I don't see how that interview can be used to source that she was born on January 13. Also, you should introduce Template:Cite_web even if you are going for a manuel ref note.
    • Hmm January 13 is from an Insta post about her birthday, while the interview gives the year, since I couldn't find her saying it all at once it's got two refs. If that post isn't sufficient I can always try and find another. Added the cite_web, though. —spookywillowwtalk 01:54, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
      • Then you should either mention that Instagram post as well, or remove the mentions of the birth month and day in that ref. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:46, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
  • Could you add that Solo was an Anthology film?
  • There is a missing dash: "make up."
  • There is a Wikipedia article for British Chinese. You can pipelink "Chinese British" to that, also add that to the infobox.
  • You occasionally misspell "tattoo" in the article.
  • I believe you should change the attribution for the Biography quote. It looks like you are quoting "Lain's tatoos."
  • I think you should mention somewhere that her character's name was officially revealed in Solo: A Star Wars Story The Official Guide. Even that Instagram post you use to source the character's name is actually a screenshot of that book. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:26, March 25, 2019 (UTC)
  • The second quote is also missing punctuation. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:46, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
  • I also would like to see some expansion about her character, like how her in-universe character is a tattoo artist just like her in real-life. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:55, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
    • Hmm think I got what you'd meant.—spookywillowwtalk 03:40, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
      • That looks better, but could you please mention that the character she portrays in the film is also a tattoo artist just like her in real-life? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:06, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
  • In comparasion to the Biography, a one-sentence intro seems too short.
  • Is she credited in Solo? If she is, Solo must be included in a Bibliography section.
    • I'm pretty sure no? I've watched through it several times looking for, and I don't think I missed it. The confirmation for her involvement came from elsewhere, as well.—spookywillowwtalk 03:40, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
  • Per the Layout Guide, "Notes and references" must come before "External links."
  • Considering these long Instagram references, the Notes and references section could use a scroll box. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:14, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
    • Added that. My apologies missing so many little things; —spookywillowwtalk 03:40, March 26, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

  • Good work on those objections; however, the article currently exceeds 250 words and it is likely to expand more. I would suggest you to ask to take the nomination down, so that you may go for a good article nomination. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 05:26, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
    • Ah rip, knew it was about 200 at the start and hadn’t re-checked. I’d like to withdraw this then, and I can work on the few outstanding comments before it goes to the other —spookywillowwtalk