Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kylia Stryder's father

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Kylia Stryder's father

• Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:41, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:55, 10 October 2021 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:11, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 14:09, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
4. YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 16:46, 13 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• There is no room for that image, please remove it. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 14:57, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:03, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Thanks Shay! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:14, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Please establish context for Kylia upon the subject's first mention.
  • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:14, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
• The extent of Kylia's appearance in the game is not really relevant to the BTS of this article. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:04, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Removed Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:14, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
• Context for Smuggler too. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:35, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Vergence

• Per precedent, please only bold "father" in the body. VergenceScatter (talk) 18:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Looks like SilverSun got it, thanks! :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:14, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Please check if the article is accurate to the source after my copy-edit here OOM 224 16:27, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Minor edit—source says the rebels recruited her. There's a few ways to gain new crew members (including event rewards) so joined is probably more appropriate there. Have a look and let me know if it still needs work. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:03, 12 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:40, 15 October 2021 (UTC)