Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kuseph Jovi

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Kuseph Jovi

Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 10:59, June 15, 2020 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Thought this would be an interesting one to nominate.

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Fan26 (Talk) 00:37, June 17, 2020 (UTC)
QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 19:03, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 23:33, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
Imperators II^(Talk) 12:34, June 25, 2020 (UTC)

~~Could you please elaborate on why Padmé decided to say that Jovi was a male in the novel?~~ Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:22, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
- Where's this elaborated? I don't see any details about it. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 07:49, June 20, 2020 (UTC)
  - I believe "Kuseph Jovi" is mentioned twice, and only the latter mention is covered in the article. At the beginning of Chapter 5, not long before the latter mention, someone asks Padmé if she is to meet "her" on Batuu, referring to "Jovi." Suspicious that the individual assumed Jovi was a woman, Padmé says that she's there to meet him. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:12, June 20, 2020 (UTC)
    - Eugh, completely missed that. Sorted. Word count: 225. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 09:40, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
~~I think there's enough room for an image now. I'd suggest going with something related to this made-up person like this one.~~ Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:44, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
- That one works. Implemented. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 21:57, June 21, 2020 (UTC)

~~The first sentence of the Bio is a run-on.~~
- Changed from comma to 'and', should work better now. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 07:46, June 22, 2020 (UTC)
~~It might be beneficial to create a page for the human Padmé talks with.~~ RattsT (talk) 00:35, June 22, 2020 (UTC)
- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 07:46, June 22, 2020 (UTC)

Hey Ben, I want to discuss this sentence in the body: "Amidala then added about her business with the starship, speculating that the her made-up man may come from off-planet". Firstly, added what? And the second half of it has an extra word in it. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 23:21, June 22, 2020 (UTC)
- Altered the "added" part and removed "on". Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 12:00, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
  - You've still got the issue with the italicized part. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:00, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
    - That's a derp from me. Fixed (Word count now 246). Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 21:48, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
      - Great. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 23:32, June 23, 2020 (UTC)

Update. Word count exactly at 250. Still barely eligible. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 13:19, June 21, 2020 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:34, June 25, 2020 (UTC)