Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Krynodd

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Krynodd

• Nominated by: Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 16:28, April 1, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Sequel era character

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UberSoldat

• BTS does not comply with the Layout Guide. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:32, April 1, 2020 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the info. Should be good now. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:39, April 1, 2020 (UTC)
• "...he finally had his chance when Plutt was kidnapped,..." Kidnapped by whom? Krynodd?
  • Context added. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:43, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
• "...he finally had his chance when Plutt was kidnapped, and quickly proved that he was an even worse master than the Crolute. The criminal strolled into the outpost and declared himself the new boss." This should be reworded to flow in chronological order i.e. He became the boss and proved he sucked at the job.
  • Reworked. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:43, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
• "He then knocked over Bobbajo when the "Storyteller" bumped into him" Bobbajo and Storyteller need context.
  • Adjusted. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:43, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
• "By that time, Krynodd had tried to take over the Outpost three times,..." Three times in total, or three additional times after the first attempt? UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:41, April 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • Three times is what it said...I changed the order to address it. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:43, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
    • It's still unclear. Is Krynodd taking over for the fourth time now, or is this part of the "three times"? UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:12, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
• Jakku needs context. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:57, April 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. Thanks again. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:43, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
    • Does the comic actually refer to Jakku as a planet? UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:12, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
• So I read the comic, and you're missing some details, such as the fact that Krynodd wanted to take over the outpost for "years." I'm also going to have to concur with Zed regarding the article's length, you haven't described his overall personality or his clothing. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:46, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

Zed

• For a character that physically appeared, this article is rather short. It can definitely be expanded with further detail regarding Unkar's kidnapping and the events of Krynodd's takeover of the outpost.
  • Added a bit. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:43, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
    • As mentioned above by Shayanomer, the article can still be expanded further. Zed42 (talk) 08:54, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
• Unkar's rescue and the events following cannot be referenced to the first part of the comic.
  • Fixed. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:43, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
• Citations for Adventures comics need to use the {{IDWAdventuresCite-2017}} template.
  • Also fixed. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:43, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
• BTS doesn't need to mention the letterer.
  • Removed. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:43, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
• Could you find a reference for the release date that isn't an article? From what I've seen, this wiki usually uses Amazon for IDW comics. Zed42 (talk) 07:54, April 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • Ok. Amazon added. Thanks for the review. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:43, April 6, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• I'm not going to continue with this. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 16:10, April 8, 2020 (UTC)