Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Keldrin-pea

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Keldrin-pea

Nominated by: NotBoop (talk) 19:01, 14 February 2023 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Spooky's Valentines Day gift
Date Archived: 06:02, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
Final word count: 141 words (0 introduction, 127 body, 14 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 141 words (0 introduction, 127 body, 14 behind the scenes)
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Excellent OOM 224 (he/him) 21:31, 14 February 2023 (UTC)
Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:23, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
Welcome to CAN! - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:29, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 06:01, 26 February 2023 (UTC)

~~Welcome to the CAN, just one thing from me: any chance we can avoid the passive voice here? "the Mriss Idda was served keldrin-peas while aboard the Namrelllew"~~ JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:06, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
- Fixed NotBoop (talk) 23:50, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
  - The peas, which are supposed to be the direct object of the clause, are still the subject here - do we know who served them so that we can say "X served the peas to..."? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:35, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
    - I think I've fixed this but not entirely sure, also fixed a few other minor things like removing extra spacing NotBoop talk 18:01, 19 February 2023 (UTC)

~~Would Typho offering the droid his napkin to clean the pea off be appropriate for the article? NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 23:57, 15 February 2023 (UTC)~~
- Added, also another later on mention in chapter 23 by G-1FY of the peas was added that I previously missed NotBoop talk 18:41, 19 February 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:01, 26 February 2023 (UTC)