Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kejik (Tython)

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Kejik (Tython)

• Nominated by: Winterz (talk) 01:50, August 24, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: derp

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:53, August 25, 2014 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:17, August 28, 2014 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:27, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Cadeth

• Youmay. Cade Calrayn 01:52, August 24, 2014 (UTC)
  • May I? Okay, it's done, sir. Winterz (talk) 01:56, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• Context for Tython. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:36, August 25, 2014 (UTC)
• I think it might be worth mentioning the other Kejik in the bts as they appear to look exactly the same and could technically be confused for the same character. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:36, August 25, 2014 (UTC)
  • All done, sir. Winterz (talk) 21:06, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

501st

• "...but it is assumed that Kejik speaks Durese because he is a Duros..." Are you the one assuming this? If so, that needs to be taken out as it is speculation. The Duros could have grown up in an orphanage that only spoke basic for all we know. 501st dogma^(talk) 14:19, August 25, 2014 (UTC)
  • Actually the one language we know he isn't speaking to customers is basic, so you can say that instead. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:27, August 25, 2014 (UTC)
    • Added, though it looks strange. Winterz (talk) 21:06, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• You should probably use the TORCite template for citing the Old Republic. There is a generic version that just contains the planet.
  • Struck after a discussion with Cade.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:07, August 28, 2014 (UTC)
• The way you word the last sentence makes it sound like his robe covered all of his clothing and his boots as well. Please reword.
  • Reworded.
• I would say that the robe is more of a grey-blue color or maybe just dark gray.
  • Yeah, it's somewhat dark gray in the game but this image sure gives the impression that it is blue.
• As you mentioned the rest of his clothing, please mention his belt as well.
  • Done.
• I can't tell from the picture but it looks like he is wearing something on his shoulder.
  • Ehrm.. see if the wording suits your objection.
• If he doesn't speak Basic you should use the translation quote template.
  • Done. Winterz (talk) 23:03, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
• Could you mention whether the other Kejik is on Republic or Imperial Balmorra? Your citation should also mention this.
  • Added.
• As a note, you should not use contractions in articles. You might also want to be more careful with your linking.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:04, August 28, 2014 (UTC)
  • Noted. Winterz (talk) 01:58, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

• Just wanted to note something. Cade's objection has been complied with for nearly two weeks without a change, someone should definitely start a vote to strike it down. Winterz (talk) 00:31, September 6, 2014 (UTC)