- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Kaslo
- Nominated by: ThePedantry (talk) 20:47, 21 September 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: The datapad is archived on Wookieepedia:Star Wars Outlaws screenshots
- Date Archived: 03:43, 9 October 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 205 words (0 introduction, 142 body, 63 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 227 words (0 introduction, 142 body, 85 behind the scenes)
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Support votes
—spookywillowwtalk 22:47, 25 September 2025 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 23:32, 25 September 2025 (UTC)
- CometSmudge (talk) 03:42, 9 October 2025 (UTC)
Objections
spookly
I really question if there's precedent behind using an image of an establishment for a character infobox. I did bring this up with Lew but I don't believe there's any current ones that do this, nor IMO should they as it's outside the boundaries for edge cases that captions were meant for.- Moved it outside the info box, But I am curious if you think the article is too short for an image and if I should just removed it. ThePedantry (talk) 02:46, 24 September 2025 (UTC)
- I asked Lew about this, and we sort of think it should be removed. Its highly unusual to have both an infobox and an image on a non-sectioned CA because it usually results in something so tiny.—spookywillowwtalk 18:48, 24 September 2025 (UTC)
- Removed
- I asked Lew about this, and we sort of think it should be removed. Its highly unusual to have both an infobox and an image on a non-sectioned CA because it usually results in something so tiny.—spookywillowwtalk 18:48, 24 September 2025 (UTC)
- Moved it outside the info box, But I am curious if you think the article is too short for an image and if I should just removed it. ThePedantry (talk) 02:46, 24 September 2025 (UTC)
"The later of which she had helped escape from Toshara's Imperial Governor's service earlier that year." is a partial sentence, it should probably be combined with the sentence before it via a comma. Was "later" meant to be "latter" here? In addition, per WP:MOS the title introduced without n individual's name right after it would generally mean the rank gets decapitalized as "governor." The same sentence should take care to use the Oxford comma.- I was apparently having a grammar crash while I was reviewing this before putting it up, Thanks for catching all that, tis updated. ThePedantry (talk) 02:46, 24 September 2025 (UTC)
The last sentence of the BTS is more relevant for the article on the Parlor itself rather than the individual.—spookywillowwtalk 00:41, 24 September 2025 (UTC)- Removed that last sentence. ThePedantry (talk) 02:46, 24 September 2025 (UTC)
Generally, establishments named [XYZ's] [establishment type] are ripe for being included as an affiliation for the individual in question.- I was not aware of that, updated. ThePedantry (talk) 20:48, 24 September 2025 (UTC)
Is the "purposal" in the quote typo'd that way in the game (thus would need a [sic]) or is it a typo while transferring to Wook?- No that was my own typo when I transcribed the message. ThePedantry (talk) 20:48, 24 September 2025 (UTC)
Quote attributions cannot be full sentences, and shouldn't ever have ending punctuation as a result, per policy—spookywillowwtalk 18:48, 24 September 2025 (UTC)- ThePedantry (talk) 20:48, 24 September 2025 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 03:42, 9 October 2025 (UTC)