Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/K220 heavy-duty peripheral processor

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K220 heavy-duty peripheral processor

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  1. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 14:36, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
  2. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 16:09, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 17:21, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
  4. CIS roundel Erebus Chronus (talk) 22:33, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
  5. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:04, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • Please add the unabridged audiobook to Appearances and investigate the abridged audiobook for a mention. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:17, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
    • Added the unabridged audiobook, the K220s are not mentioned in the abridged audiobook. Thanks for the review! Cheers, grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:17, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Is Ubiqtorate (station) a conjectural title?
    • The novel only refers to it and some other stations as the "Ubiqtorate station" with the "Ubiqtorate" being an organization in the Empire that ran the station. Other places mention other Ubiqtorate stations or bases, and sometimes the stations and bases are referred to as just "the Ubiqtorate". For example, the book also mentions the Ubiqtorate station at Parshoone. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 13:46, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Do we need double referencing for the affiliation? The Essential Atlas isn't listed as a source in the article.
    • At the time of the novel, nothing was officially confirming (nor including in the article) that the Empire had become the "Imperial Remnant," so I was maybe being overly specific since the fact the Empire had become the Imperial Remnant by then is not included or able to be referenced to the novel itself, but is confirmed in TEA. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 13:46, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
      • Then you only need one ref. For example, see how Death Squadron is referenced here, even though that term wasn't used in the film. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 14:02, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
  • "During the crisis caused by the discovery of the Caamas Document[1] in 19 ABY,[4] which implicated members of the Bothan species" Dangling participle here. I would suggest moving the date to the beginning of the sentence.
  • The BTS says "first mentioned" while Appearances uses {{1st}}. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 06:46, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Can you also note that the novel is the second instalment of Star Wars: The Hand of Thrawn Duology in the BTS? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 14:02, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • Per Wookieepedia:Layout Guide#Template usage, {{ID}} should not be used when a source uses a shortened version of the name. Perhaps you can even mention something like, "or simply referred to as K220?" JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 03:26, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
    • Just removed {{ID}}, since it is just the first part of the full name. Thanks for the review! Cheers, grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 13:46, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
  • "Zakarisz Ghent volunteered to accompany Imperial General Hestiv to the Ubiqtorate station orbiting the planet Yaga Minor to attempt to recover an original copy of the document." What document is this? Please clarify.
  • You have two consecutive references to Vision of the Future, so I'm guessing the first can be removed. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 19:26, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
    • Yeah, happened while switching up a sentence to address Shayanomer's review. Thanks for the review! Cheers, grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 08:22, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
OOM

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:11, 16 March 2021 (UTC)