Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/K-DROID

< Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations
The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Contents

  • 1 K-DROID
    • 1.1 (3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Ayrehead
        • 1.1.2.2 Imperators II
      • 1.1.3 Comments

K-DROID

  • Nominated by: Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 19:11, November 16, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Positive, Encouraging K-DROID.

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:42, November 20, 2017 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 13:58, November 25, 2017 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 22:53, December 23, 2017 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead
  • What kind of station and frequency? Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:34, November 17, 2017 (UTC)
    • Presumably radio, but no sources specify such.
  • Could you make clear that they broadcast the song in 4.3 ABY while G2-9T was listening (I'm assuming). 00:34, November 17, 2017 (UTC)
    • Done. - Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 01:13, November 17, 2017 (UTC)
  • Could you expand the BTS slightly to mention that park goers could hear the radio playing in the line? Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:35, November 17, 2017 (UTC)
    • Added. - Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 23:35, November 20, 2017 (UTC)
Imperators II
  • You have two consecutive [1] references here, please revise.
    • Fixed. - Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 20:15, December 3, 2017 (UTC)
  • On the G2 repair droid/Legends FAN you state the first source to identify the droid model was TNEGTD. Please update the referencing accordingly.
    • Added. - Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 20:15, December 3, 2017 (UTC)
  • The Blog backup link doesn't work, please provide an archival date.
    • Added. - Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 20:29, December 3, 2017 (UTC)
  • Category:Star Tours is supposed to be an in-universe category, so I don't think it's a good fit for this article. Imperators II(Talk) 19:58, December 3, 2017 (UTC)
    • Removed; personally, I think that cat is in need of a major reworking. - Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 20:15, December 3, 2017 (UTC)
  • The dating reference needs to be converted into a manual ref note. The cited article doesn't actually use the BBY/ABY notation, nor, of course, does it explain how "4.3: Death Star III? [WDST]" relates to G2-9T. Imperators II(Talk) 20:40, December 3, 2017 (UTC)
    • How would you go about saying that? I've seen a lot of article that translate, say, "fifteen years before ANH" straight into 15 BBY without a note. - Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 00:23, December 12, 2017 (UTC)
      • Firstly, you need to say something to the effect of "The Blog post dates the events surrounding Death Star III to 4.3 years after the Battle of Yavin, which corresponds to the year 4.3 ABY according to the dating system used by sources such as X." Secondly, you need to connect those "Death Star III events" to G2-9T. Imperators II(Talk) 08:54, December 12, 2017 (UTC)
        • How does that look? - Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 21:35, December 17, 2017 (UTC)
          • I think that should do. Imperators II(Talk) 21:44, December 17, 2017 (UTC)
  • Did you check whether there are any other articles for music stations to warrant a specific category? Imperators II(Talk) 21:44, December 17, 2017 (UTC)
    • Closest thing I was able to find was the Grand Army of the Republic broadcast, but I'm not sure the two would fit in the same category. - Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 22:02, December 17, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

  1. Made an edit to the infobox for clarity. Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 13:58, November 25, 2017 (UTC)