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K-16 Bryar Pistol
- Nominated by:
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:44, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- WookieeProject (optional): WookieeProject: Battlefront
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Support
- Glad to see the gun noms have returned. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:32, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:32, 23 December 2021 (UTC)- LucaRoR
(Talk) 07:36, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:56, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
OOM 224 22:32, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
Object
Macaroni
I don't think the bts can fit both the audio file and the quote. One's got to go.- Removed the quote since, unlike the sound sample, it's much more accessible.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:58, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
- Removed the quote since, unlike the sound sample, it's much more accessible.
One-handed is infobox-exclusive.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:33, 22 December 2021 (UTC)- If I recall correctly, during my other blaster nominations, there was a precedence set for that bit. Mentioning "one-handed" in the article body was deemed unnecessary as it can be assumed that a blaster pistol has the size of a "one-handed weapon," similar to being used for "ranged combat."
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:58, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
- Works for me. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:32, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
- If I recall correctly, during my other blaster nominations, there was a precedence set for that bit. Mentioning "one-handed" in the article body was deemed unnecessary as it can be assumed that a blaster pistol has the size of a "one-handed weapon," similar to being used for "ranged combat."
Comments
- "A comprehensive article must not exceed 250 words in length if it provides an introduction. This word total counts the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material…" Unless I've missed something, this should be a GAN as the intro, body and BTS amount to 307 words. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 21:53, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
- Actually, it shouldn't have an introduction in the first place since the article body doesn't reach 165 words. My apologies for the inconvience.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:22, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
- All good! Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:32, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
- Actually, it shouldn't have an introduction in the first place since the article body doesn't reach 165 words. My apologies for the inconvience.
- Just wanted to make sure the change was intentional: That EA page in the external links actually uses an hyphen, not an en dash.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:58, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
- Moved it back to match the source. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:24, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:49, 29 December 2021 (UTC)