Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/K'Jtari

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k'Jtari

• Nominated by: c'Wedin^(talk) 21:02, February 11, 2018 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. —Tommy-Macaroni ^{(TAKE A SEAT)} 20:37, February 13, 2018 (UTC)
2. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 06:13, February 23, 2018 (UTC)
3. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:00, March 10, 2018 (UTC)
4. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:46, March 27, 2018 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 22:34, March 28, 2018 (UTC)
6. Exiled Jedi (talk) 22:49, March 28, 2018 (UTC)

Object

AV

• Where is the "months" figure actually given in Vader 25? - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 21:12, February 11, 2018 (UTC)
  • From the coda. "Months ago, Darth Vader arrived for the first time on Tatooine." - Cwedin^(talk) 21:16, February 11, 2018 (UTC)
• Could you be more percise with your dating citation? Galactic Atlas dates the secret mission to Geonosis to 0 ABY, which definately places the previous issues in the same year. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 22:35, February 16, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. - Cwedin^(talk) 20:16, February 22, 2018 (UTC)

Tommy

• Surely Star Wars: Galactic Atlas needs to be worked into the date ref, as it provides the whole BBY/ABY system?—Tommy-Macaroni ^{(TAKE A SEAT)} 19:14, February 12, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. - Cwedin^(talk) 20:32, February 13, 2018 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• Based on that quote alone I don't think you can actually say that the k'Jtari are a species, they could be a social group or just the name of an organization. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:08, February 25, 2018 (UTC)
  • Fair point. I've updated the text and taken out the species infobox. - Cwedin^(talk) 01:46, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
• We don't know when Starros was taught the technique so I don't think we can say the group definitely existed during the reign of the Empire. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:00, March 11, 2018 (UTC)
  • Fixed. - Cwedin^(talk) 21:47, March 12, 2018 (UTC)
    • I'd just end the first sentence after "the galaxy". You give all the information we have date wise later on in the article, and technically we don't know that they didn't exist before and during the reign of the Empire. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:13, March 12, 2018 (UTC)
      • Done. - Cwedin^(talk) 22:15, March 12, 2018 (UTC)

The CP

Hello Cwedin, I'd like to see a bit more context in the article. At what time period did the K'jtari inhabit the galaxy? Maybe mention that Sana was a smuggler, and that they were on Sunspot Prison? Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 23:38, March 5, 2018 (UTC)

• Alright, how's it look now? - Cwedin^(talk) 23:53, March 5, 2018 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• "Star Wars: Galactic Atlas dates the events of Darth Vader 4 to 0 ABY, so it can be deduced that Darth Vader 1 is also set in that year." I think you are going to need to explain your deduction in the reference.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 00:20, March 8, 2018 (UTC)
  • I've rewritten the reference, but I honestly have no idea how to phrase it. - Cwedin^(talk) 21:47, March 12, 2018 (UTC)
• You are linking to the wrong roleplaying game in the BTS.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 22:21, March 24, 2018 (UTC)
  • gah. - Cwedin^(talk) 22:25, March 24, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

• I removed the full comic book release date, per this discussion (and presumably next week's Mofference). - Cwedin^(talk) 20:16, February 22, 2018 (UTC)