Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Junker systems

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Junker systems

Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:30, 11 April 2022 (UTC)
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~~From my perspective, I would just use the {{System}} template, since we're currently treating them similarly to the Lexas systems, even though that's not a status article.~~
- The system template has an orbits field for planets. This isn't a single system, so I can't use that. Besides, the Lexas systems doesn't even use an infobox. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:08, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
  - Not really an issue to me, since you can put everything in the |other= field. There are also star cluster status articles that use this template.
    - Other objects is a bit weird for a planet, but if it removes the appearances of sector battles… changed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:09, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
~~Since it being in the galaxy is a given no matter what, would you be able to word it differently?~~ Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 00:00, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
- There's no redundancy in linking it, in my opinion. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:08, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
  - Per massive precedent, mentioning it's in the galaxy is redundant since it's a given. It was removed from one of my nominations because it's not needed. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 16:19, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
    - I see. Removed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:09, 16 April 2022 (UTC)

"The mission concluded with Squadron Four rendezvousing aboard the cruiser-carrier Allegiance behind Jarbanov's moon, which escaped into hyperspace" — dangling participle, reads like the moon escaped into hyperspace.
~~It would be beneficial to note where the Aerie was collecting the wreckage from.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 11:30, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
- Both addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 12:20, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
"the Aerie also escaped the system thereafter" — given that rogue planets (=planets not located in star systems) are a thing in Star Wars, we shouldn't be assuming that celestial bodies are located inside systems unless a source actually says that. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:02, 19 April 2022 (UTC)
- Shadow Fall establishes that Jarbanov is in the "inner system" of whatever system it's located in, while also being in the outskirts of the junker systems. I should have reflected that better in the article. How does it all look now? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:55, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

Wasn't sure how to handle a group of systems without using a sector infobox. Do object if you feel strongly about it. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:30, 11 April 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:42, 20 April 2022 (UTC)