Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jrul

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Jrul

  • Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:59, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: EP3 novel

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Wow! I never knew the Girl Scouts were responsible for the crop circle phenomenon. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 18:35, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
  2. —Axinal Convocation Chamber 20:30, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Menkooroo 14:27, June 1, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ECvote ~SavageBOB sig 15:23, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object

  1. Axinal
    • Should the Sources section be an Appearances section?
      • Yep. Changed.
    • If Jrul is confirmed male, it should be linked somewhere in the article, as well as added to the categories.
      • No, simply a stupid error.
    • Otherwise, nice article.—Axinal Convocation Chamber 10:44, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
      • Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:27, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Rubedo
    • You cannot use a quote template in the middle of prose. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 17:58, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
      • Thought something like that. Fixed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:18, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
  3. DAMN what a novel
    • "Fellow Jedi Master" kinda makes it seem like Obi-Wan is Jrul's contemporary --- can you reword?
      • Done.
    • There's a "his" in the bts.
      • Removed.
    • Can you use {{CSWECite}} in the Sources section? Page number isn't necessary (just leave blank space between those two vertical lines), so you should be OK even if you don't own it. Menkooroo 15:40, May 30, 2011 (UTC)
      • Added. Thank you. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:35, May 30, 2011 (UTC)
        • Not... quite. Check out Precht for an example of how to properly use the template. It's really handy to know. Menkooroo 04:53, May 31, 2011 (UTC)
          • Should be OK now. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:11, May 31, 2011 (UTC)
            • No, not yet. All you have to do is look at the code used in Precht and emulate it. You can even copy and paste it, change "III" to "II" and "Precht" to "Jrul." Shouldn't be too difficult. Menkooroo 04:43, June 1, 2011 (UTC)
              • Actually, that's what I did. Weird, but should be OK now. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:19, June 1, 2011 (UTC)
                • Good stuff. Just a handy note that it's becoming common practice to not include the page number in the "Sources" section (only include it when it's a <ref>). Menkooroo 14:27, June 1, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Bob
    • Is there any context you can add as to why Obi-Wan thought of Ja Rule, er, Jrul's question during his fight with Grievous? ~SavageBOB sig 02:53, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
      • Nope. See below the nom for the question itself for more info. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:53, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

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