Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jilrua

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Jilrua

Manoof (talk) 01:54, August 6, 2015 (UTC)
Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:12, August 22, 2015 (UTC)
501st dogma^(talk) 14:46, September 1, 2015 (UTC)
--Eyrezer (talk) 07:14, September 12, 2015 (UTC)
Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:26, September 13, 2015 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (talk) 17:26, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

~~Similarly to your previous nomination, the full release date needs to be sourced. Check your other articles for this issue as well ;) :) Manoof (talk) 04:43, August 3, 2015 (UTC)~~
- Changed to just the year both for Jilrua and Unagin. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:53, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
Is there any way to remove some of the fluff about the actual species? You jump from the Jilruans' subjugation by the hutts, to their usage, to Jilrua's isolation, back to Jilruans' usage. Manoof (talk) 22:56, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
- You're right. Removed info not really relevant to the planet. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:06, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
  - You can probably add back a small bit to give an idea on when the planet was conquered by the hutts. Even if it's just something like "...sentient species that by XX BBY had been conquered...". Doesn't have to be big, but the native sentient species' subjugation by a foreign species seems important to the history of the planet. Manoof (talk) 22:47, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
    - Added the bit about the date. Imperators II^(Talk) 23:02, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
      - Awesome, should've probably mentioned that the first time Manoof (talk) 01:54, August 6, 2015 (UTC)

~~While I know it was removed before, I think that it is important to briefly note that the Jilruans were used as combatants by the Hutts and others.~~--Exiled Jedi (talk) 22:48, September 14, 2015 (UTC)
- How does that look to you? Imperators II^(Talk) 10:22, September 15, 2015 (UTC)