Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jerlyn's family's farm

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Jerlyn's family's farm

• Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 17:40, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 05:26, 19 July 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 208 words (0 introduction, 164 body, 44 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 208 words (0 introduction, 164 body, 44 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR WP:Novels WP:GE

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 03:22, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
2. respecting that savvy 164 wordcount.—spookywilloww^talk 03:03, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
3. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 05:22, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

Object

spookly

• Just the most minor thing, but either one of the (I think two?) quotes that mention the farm could be added.—spookywilloww^talk 17:46, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
  • oops, added it CometSmudge (talk) 17:53, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• Hate to do this, but in my copy-edit, I replaced an instance of "Dee-Twelve" with "the droid," as there were too many instances of the former in a sentence and it was getting repetitive. This brought the word limit to 165. Either needs to be sectioned or something else needs to be reworded to bring it down to 164 without losing info. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 05:50, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Got it back under CometSmudge (talk) 16:26, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:22, 19 July 2024 (UTC)