Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jens Hausser

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Jens Hausser

  • Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 15:00, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First model, won't be the last
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Support

  1. No further objections, your honor. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (she/her) (talk) 23:52, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:07, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:26, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
  4. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 12:39, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:15, 16 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Immi Thrax
  • The order of the names in the image caption (if read left to right) places Peter Tupper in the center of the image, but the article body describes the person whose shoulder is touched (the one in the center) as Jens Hausser. I'm not sure which is correct. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (she/her) (talk) 23:42, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Didn't realise the order mattered! The error has been rectified. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:48, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
  • "The image was published in the June 1, 1993 book Wanted by Cracken, a supplementary book for the Star Wars Roleplaying Game (RPG) by West End Games." This should be rephrased, as saying "in the [X] book" is done for years ("in the 1993 book") rather than dates of publication ("in the book Wanted by Cracken, which was published on June 1, 1993") Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (she/her) (talk) 23:42, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
    • How's that? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:48, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Is Jens Hausser credited in the sources listed in the bibliography? Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (she/her) (talk) 23:42, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the clarity on discord, section has been removed. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:48, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
  • For the referencing in the article body and table: right now, the table has all of the information about the two books sourced to the DeviantArt posts. The article body has information about the Jarth Findo image cited to Barnes and Noble. Please look these over and adjust the refs. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (she/her) (talk) 06:50, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Ok so only that specific publishing date is referenced by the barnes and noble site, I moved the ref for wanted by cracken to make that clearer. Is that what you meant? We only have the year in the published works table per the current SAs, which can be referenced to the book itself based on feedback I've had on other noms Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:55, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
      • Sorry for the delay; thankfully Jocasta reminded me. What I mean is, information about the book itself that's available in that book (like its title! usually the publication year) can be cited to the book rather than to DeviantArt. DA would be used for the contribution and the portion of the notes prior to the uncredited ref which is good as-is. Please let me know if I'm not being clear enough or if you'd prefer me to do it and you review what I did. :) Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (she/her) (talk) 00:06, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • The more parameter should link to a Hauser disambig page (which can include Howzer) and not just to a mainspace article.
    • Redirect changed to a disambig Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:04, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Review note: note these formatting errors. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 14:51, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Thanks mate, just copy/pasted from the page so will keep an eye on that in future :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:04, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Please write out what RPG is in order to avoid just using the acronym. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:04, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:39, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
      • Sorry, I realised the term "Roleplaying game" had previously been used, so kept the acronym and added "(RPG)" to the previous mention per normal acronym standards. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:41, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
  • Seems like it would be more appropriate to use the image that only has Jarth Findo in it Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:38, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Swapped out Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:04, 11 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • I couldn't find a specific publication date for Star Wars Gamemaster Handbook beyond the year - it's article notes a month but I could not verify it outside crowdsourced sites. I've written the article accordingly. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 15:00, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Perhaps the book itself lists the month? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 14:51, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
      • Only the year :( Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:16, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
        • Shay got it! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:55, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
  • While Jens modelled for the illustrations, it is not clear if that is his occupation (no source available saying he is a model). As such I haven't included that as his occupation, resulting in an empty infobox. I can understand that, in the context of star wars, it WAS his occupation, so can include the infobox noting his occupation as a model if needed. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:42, 23 October 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 11:15, 16 November 2021 (UTC)