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J-DH3
- Nominated by: AmazinglyCool
(talk) 00:52, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 23:31, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 223 words (0 introduction, 66 body, 157 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG
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Support
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:37, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:45, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 02:16, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
Object
Dani
I'm pretty unaware of our usual methods for VG articles, but are you keeping the location of their battle vague in the bio because it can happen in multiple areas? Should the Biography pick a location/situation, and notate there are others in the BTS though? NBDani(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 01:04, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
- Lewisr explained to me on Discord. NBDani
(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 14:40, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
- Lewisr explained to me on Discord. NBDani
Marvac
I feel like you should at least biefly mention the various concept art of these Haxion Brood Bounty Droids from The Art of Star Wars Jedi: Fallen Order (its on p. 166). Marvacian Archivist (talk) 10:10, 16 August 2023 (UTC)- I feel that those concepts are better suited for the Haxion Brood Bounty Droid article. None of them depict the droid in question. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 22:33, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- I feel that those concepts are better suited for the Haxion Brood Bounty Droid article. None of them depict the droid in question. AmazinglyCool
Also does this droid appear in the combat challenges and the battle grid mode. If it does, you must mention this in your bts. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 10:24, 16 August 2023 (UTC)- The droid doesn't. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 22:33, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- The droid doesn't. AmazinglyCool
Please state that Kestis is a fugitive. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 10:29, 16 August 2023 (UTC)- Again, I'll add this to the article, but it isn't necessary to the context of the article. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 22:33, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- Again, I'll add this to the article, but it isn't necessary to the context of the article. AmazinglyCool
Maybe include a quote of J-DH3 as it captures Kestis? Marvacian Archivist (talk) 10:49, 16 August 2023 (UTC)- Added. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 22:33, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- Added. AmazinglyCool
Objection(s) overridden by EduCorps 16:48, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
Anil
Isn't J-DH3 one of the reprogrammed loadlifter droids? If so, I think this should be reflected in the article body and categories.Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:15, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
- This is what Haxion Brood Bounty Droid signifies. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 22:33, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- Yes, it does, but the reader may not know that all Haxion bounty droids were loadlifter droids. Also, J-DH3 being once a loadlifter and later reprogrammed to be a bounty hunter is a significant detail about the character, even though it's a trait shared by a handful of others.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:29, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- Added. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 23:36, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
- Added. AmazinglyCool
- Yes, it does, but the reader may not know that all Haxion bounty droids were loadlifter droids. Also, J-DH3 being once a loadlifter and later reprogrammed to be a bounty hunter is a significant detail about the character, even though it's a trait shared by a handful of others.
- This is what Haxion Brood Bounty Droid signifies. AmazinglyCool
One last thing: Could you clarify in BTS that Kestis is the player character and BD-1 does the scanning for him?Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:20, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 17:44, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. AmazinglyCool
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 23:31, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
Vote to strike objections (EC only)
For Marvacian's, from the 16th.—spookywillowwtalk 16:32, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 16:32, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
NBDani (they/them)Yeager's Repairs 16:44, 30 August 2023 (UTC)