Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Irizi'ar'alani's quarters

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Irizi'ar'alani's quarters

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Support

  1. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 05:42, 31 August 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:44, 1 September 2022 (UTC)
  3. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 19:56, 2 September 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 23:01, 4 September 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic of the First of the Quesoth
  • From the other CAN page:
  • Article should sit at Irizi'ar'alani's quarters or whatever Ar'alani's Irizi name is :P Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 08:19, 21 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Also, no need to have a parentheses in the title. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 08:20, 21 August 2022 (UTC)
  • The date note should mention the quarters, not the dojo.
    • done
  • No need to specify Thrawn was Mitth'raw'nuru, as he's only mentioned once. There's quite a lot of precedent. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 11:06, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
    • fixed
  • You bold "Ziara's quarters," however, that isn't an official name. Please reword the article.
  • Add a quote, please.
  • You should introduce that Ziara did wire sculpting within the article before introducing her statues.
  • Introduce variation when identifying Ziara, please: "the senior cadet, the member of the Irizi ruling family..."
    • all done
  • Why is Taharim Academy in the list of affiliations? I don't find anything in the book saying the quarters are affiliated with the academy. Also, in the case it's specified, it's infobox-exclusive.
    • nothing concrete, removed
  • You can establish that Ar'alani—or Ziara, whatever :P— resided in the quarters at some point between 39 and 37 BBY. Also, it is unnecessary to mention "BBY" the first time.
    • self contextualizing. BBY issue taken care of.
  • Please establish that Chaos Rising is part of the Ascendancy Trilogy.
  • Mentioning the art gallery is unnecessary.
    • both done
  • Please establish that the dojo was below the quarters and could be accessed from the quarters through a staircase. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 22:04, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
    • 'downstairs' isnt a confirmation that there were stairs leading to the dojo. coulda been an elevator. bit about the dojo added, though. BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 23:55, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Please remove the 'Chiss Ascendancy' category. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 11:20, 31 August 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 23:09, 4 September 2022 (UTC)