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Irisophant
- Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 01:27, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 20:26, 19 September 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 132 words (0 introduction, 93 body, 39 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR
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Support
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:25, 16 September 2023 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 05:15, 17 September 2023 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 20:26, 19 September 2023 (UTC)
Object
Lew
You don't need to cite the specific date in the BTS- Ok, removed.
Are Marda's pronouns citable to the story? It's written as though coming from her POV- Good catch.
The way the story is presented appears that she is talking about stuff after they happened ('It started in a public house on the planet Dantooine'), which should be notedLewisr (talk) 19:34, 16 September 2023 (UTC)- Do you have any suggestion for how to do this? When/where/how she is talking about the stuff is never defined nor is it even said what exactly the story is (a journal, a recording, or her talking to someone in real time). I sort of just took it as an artistic choice. Panther436 (talk) 22:23, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
- It reads like some form of written thing, like a diary in a way, that was intended for her descendants, hence what it has at the start about about her being whomever's grandmother, mother etc. I think saying that sometime even later she documented these events for her descendants including a mention of the irisophant would be sufficient, does that work with you? Lewisr (talk) 22:40, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you!! I added it now Panther436 (talk) 23:19, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
- It reads like some form of written thing, like a diary in a way, that was intended for her descendants, hence what it has at the start about about her being whomever's grandmother, mother etc. I think saying that sometime even later she documented these events for her descendants including a mention of the irisophant would be sufficient, does that work with you? Lewisr (talk) 22:40, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
- Do you have any suggestion for how to do this? When/where/how she is talking about the stuff is never defined nor is it even said what exactly the story is (a journal, a recording, or her talking to someone in real time). I sort of just took it as an artistic choice. Panther436 (talk) 22:23, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:26, 19 September 2023 (UTC)