Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Internal Security Bureau

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Internal Security Bureau

• Nominated by: Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:16, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: ISB's baby cousin?

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Tommy Macaroni 15:10, April 10, 2018 (UTC)
   • Thanks!--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:13, April 10, 2018 (UTC)
2. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:54, April 14, 2018 (UTC)
3. Its kinda strange how the CSWE just seemed to have made things up. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 18:51, April 19, 2018 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 21:26, April 19, 2018 (UTC)
5. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:52, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Tommy

• Reported by who?
  • That was my mistake, it just says that they were everywhere--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:16, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
• Both books in the BTS need their authors.
  • If I may interject, it's not really necessary (and there's precedent for not doing so) to list the CSWE's authors or editors. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:07, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
    • Okay thanks for telling me, sorry about that. Tommy Macaroni 08:15, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
  • Just to reiterate, I'd still like to see the authors for Dawn of Rebellion. Tommy Macaroni 21:06, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
    • Ah, added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:43, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
• I think you could phrase the second sentence better, it's a bit odd with the "were also feared" bit. Tommy Macaroni 07:48, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
  • Rephrased--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:16, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
    • Actually removed that part. It says that the agency is dreaded but not its agents.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:57, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
• You should say it was fist mentioned in legends in CSWE, not just mentioned in legends in CSWE.
  • Rephrased--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:57, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
• Should the lone "Bureau" be capitalised?
  • Sometimes the FBI is referred to "Bureau", I did the same but looking back, it's better to not capitalize it.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:57, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
• Loyalty to what?
  • All it mentions, I'd assume the Empire/Emperor--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:57, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
• Feared by who? Tommy Macaroni 20:35, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
  • Doesn't specify. The term was dreaded in the book--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:57, April 9, 2018 (UTC)
• "The Star Wars Legends The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia, released" doesn't really make sense, I think it would be better if you said CSWE is a book ("The Star Wars Legends book The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia, released") Tommy Macaroni 07:51, April 10, 2018 (UTC)
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:26, April 10, 2018 (UTC)

Imperators Security Bureau

• {{CSWECite}} for ref 2. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:54, April 20, 2018 (UTC)
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:13, April 20, 2018 (UTC)
    • The full entry. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:18, April 20, 2018 (UTC)
      • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:23, April 21, 2018 (UTC)
• Review note: I've removed the long laundry list of the sourcebook's authors from the BTS as well as the mention of the fact the book is based on Rebels and Rogue One (what has that got to do with the subject of the article?) Imperators II^(Talk) 19:54, April 20, 2018 (UTC)
  • Okay seems fine to me, and it was for added context--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:13, April 20, 2018 (UTC)

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