- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
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- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:53, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: These seem more handy than fire extinguishers.
(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:30, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
- Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 06:21, April 2, 2014 (UTC)
501st dogma(talk) 17:33, April 6, 2014 (UTC)- Supreme Emperor (talk) 13:49, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
This goes for everyone for everyone here: The purpose of these reviews is for the nominator to learn from the mistakes that are pointed out by the reviewer. The basic expectation is that nominators will take the reviews to heart and apply the objections to their current and future nominations. Errors repeated in numerous consecutive nominations are pretty much unacceptable. Cade 
Calrayn 14:22, April 25, 2014 (UTC)
Object
Lee's charge
The devices could also be used to create a thick smog, which could then use to cover an escape.: Could you reword this sentence a little bit?- Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:33, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
Context for the Galactic Civil War.Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:08, March 31, 2014 (UTC)- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:33, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth
You make no mention of what was in the cartridges, you just mention that there are also water vapor cartridges. Please at least specify that the contents were not water.- It doesn't say what's in the cartridges just that they generate the mist, which I've changed the wording to reflect. We don't know that the mist generating capsules don't contain any water so I'm not sure that it should be added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:48, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
"catologue" is not an American English spelling. It is "catalog".- Sorry, I didn't realise. Thanks for fixing it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:48, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
"first shown" - please explain this better in the BTS. It was included in a section on buyable equipment, and also received an image.- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:48, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
Please give a timeframe for when it was produced; even if that's just "produced by the company Agrierd Intergalactics by the time of the Galactic Civil War between..." Cade Calrayn 03:33, April 23, 2014 (UTC)- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:48, April 23, 2014 (UTC)