Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Incident commander (second nomination)

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Incident commander

• Nominated by: Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 02:20, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject: Novels

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Two things: Avoid abbreviations in articles like this if it wasn't introduced prior, and avoid leaving empty fields in a citation template. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:23, 9 August 2021 (UTC)
2. Minnabird ^(talk) 00:08, 12 August 2021 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:37, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 02:00, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 19:23, 20 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• Please format the story with {{InsiderCite}} and list the republished story in Appearances, per precedent.
  • Done.
• BTS is missing full Insider publication date. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:34, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Looking for a source for a release date, will get back to this one. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 14:00, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Added. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 23:36, 7 August 2021 (UTC)

Minnabird

• Could possibly use some context on the hostage crisis? (i.e., brief note of who took whom hostage). Minnabird ^(talk) 11:14, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Contextified. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 23:42, 11 August 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Short stories should get quotes rather than italics. The bts can also mention that it was a short story.
• The quote does not capitalize "incident commander" yet this article's title does. Which is it? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:23, 15 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• I've checked and found no mention of Lon Shevu being an Incident Commander, per the removal page. Added a proper reference for the date, and removed a piece of trivia from the BTS. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 02:20, 7 August 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 03:20, 19 August 2021 (UTC)