Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Imperial sentry post

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Imperial sentry post

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Support

  1. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 13:10, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:09, 6 November 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:31, 18 November 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:15, 18 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • Could you merge the two paragraph, as they are both composed by a single sentence?
    • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:01, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Since the Uprising leader has a name (even though it is only a nickname), you should probably mention it.
    • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:01, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Is it correct that Kouhun links to the page about the insects? If yes, perhaps a bit of context for them. Also, a touch of context for the Noble Court?
    • I associate Kouhun with the group than the insects lol fixed that and added context, which had to be referenced separately Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:01, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Is there no quote available? LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 16:02, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Mentioned on Discord but there's no clear attribution who says anything in the crew runs and they're definitely not dialogue. They're written from an IU perspective but that's about it. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:01, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
  • Seems like Adelhard's Empire should be pipelinked in the body instead of the Galactic Empire. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:18, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Good catch, updated! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:22, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Article body does not make it clear that this belonged to Ubrik Adelhard's Imperial remnant aside from a pipelink. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:29, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Clarified, how's that? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:17, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
      • Affiliation should be established when introducing the subject. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:12, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
        • Can't get it much more forward than that :) That ok? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:43, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Is the title the actual name of the subject or is it conjecture? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:12, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Conjecture template added Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:26, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
  • I don't see the need for that last sentence, it has no relation to the sentry post. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:41, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Sorry, I'm confused as the last sentence is talking about the raid on the sentry post? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:20, 18 November 2021 (UTC)
      • Yeah, but I actually think it would be better to detail who the operatives were upon mentioning them first. Sorry for not clarifying earlier. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:03, 18 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • I removed affiliation for the empire as it is possible the sentry post was established by Adelhard, we do not know so having the empire would be speculation. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:08, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 15:15, 18 November 2021 (UTC)