Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Imperial outpost (prison camp)

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Imperial outpost (prison camp)

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 16:25, February 26, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project Hero

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 01:23, February 27, 2013 (UTC)
2. Winterz (talk) 13:06, February 28, 2013 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 00:52, March 2, 2013 (UTC)
4. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:56, March 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. CC-8
   • Reckon you could say in the body that Rusk later mentioned the outpost to the Hero? Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 06:20, February 27, 2013 (UTC)
     • Done. Cade Calrayn 15:48, February 27, 2013 (UTC)
2. Lionel Richie will keep singing
   • Avoid pipelinking the Surgeons, sir, their name seems pretty significant in that subject.
     • No, they weren't called the Surgeons at that point. It's a link to the article on a squad that was later known as the Surgeons.
   • You should clarify that Rusk didn't enlist with false credentials (different wording ofc) in the second reference, considering you make the assessment of the legal minimum to enlist yet you just explain with "Therefore, Sergeant Rusk must have been older than 15", be more clear.
     • Done.
   • "They escaped the base with no fatalities," are you implying that there were no fatalities to neither sides? If not, then you should clarify "with no fatalities to their side" or something like that. Winterz (talk) 00:01, February 28, 2013 (UTC)
     • Done. Cade Calrayn 04:30, February 28, 2013 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi
   • I believe that you can say in the infobox that the base was created by 3653 BBY.
     • Done.
   • In your date reasoning, please provide the source that says that Garza enlisted at 15.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 00:13, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
     • Done. Cade Calrayn 03:16, March 3, 2013 (UTC)

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