Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Honor Salima

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Honor Salima

  • Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 10:02, January 5, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/5 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:03, January 6, 2019 (UTC)
  2. We all came here during the Mofference according to the sig timestamps. Fan26 (Talk) 03:15, January 6, 2019 (UTC)
  3. --Lewisr (talk) 00:22, January 7, 2019 (UTC)
  4. Good way to "Honor" the character. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 20:12, January 9, 2019 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 23:18, January 9, 2019 (UTC)
  6. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 23:29, January 9, 2019 (UTC)
  7. Good work!--Vitus InfinitusTalk 04:47, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • I think the word "commanded" should be pipelinked to Commanding officer instead of Commander since we don't know her rank.
    • She is a commander, a mention to it has been added and the lik to Commanding officer was added too.
  • I think there is a missing ref [1] right before "In 19 BBY."
    • Good catch, added
  • "Start" of the Clone Wars can be pipelinked to the First Battle of Geonosis.
    • Done
  • Since she is wearing a Republic officer's uniform, I believe the article should have Category:Republic Navy officers instead of Category:Republic Navy personnel.
    • Changed
  • I believe there should be a comma before "and wore" in the second paragraph.
    • Added
  • There is no need for a manual reference note for Galactic Atlas since it directly dates the Battle of Coruscant to 19 BBY. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 11:03, January 5, 2019 (UTC)
Fan
  • "preventing the Separatist from leaving with Chancellor." An 's' is missing on the end of separatists. Fan26 (Talk) 17:34, January 5, 2019 (UTC)
Imp
  • Does the source specifically say "the hyperspace jump point"? I'd imagine the Coruscant system had several such points. Imperators II(Talk) 15:46, January 8, 2019 (UTC)
    • It does says the hyperspace jump point. This is the information on the book "The Coruscant Home Fleet moved to cut off the hyperspace jump point, buying the time needed for a rescue squad to execute a daring boarding raid against the Separatist flagship"--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 21:26, January 8, 2019 (UTC)
Vitus
  • I think it should be changed to clarifty that Salima didn't hold the rank of commander, but rather was the Coruscant Home Defense Fleet Commander. As the context suggests, "commander" is not referring to the actual military rank of a naval commander like Commander Prakas but rather it's used as the definition of someone in authority. For example, Captain Junus was the commander of the Fortress Vader Imperial garrison, or in real life, Lieutenant General Patton was the US Seventh Army Commander.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 04:24, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

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