Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Hobi Rann

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Contents

  • 1 Hobi Rann
    • 1.1 (4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Cadeth
        • 1.1.2.2 Exiled Jedi
        • 1.1.2.3 SE
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Hobi Rann

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:49, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Not really sure why this guy was included in the book.

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. That's what I think whenever I see stuff from RPGs here. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 11:10, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:03, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 23:58, April 25, 2014 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 16:57, May 3, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 14:20, May 25, 2014 (UTC)
  6. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:15, May 28, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Cadeth
  • Context on Cloud City. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 04:43, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
    • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:43, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • You don't specify in the body that he lived during the Rebellion era. I assume the adventure is said to take place after the Battle of Yavin or something similar. The Galactic Civil War lasted from 2 BBY to 19 ABY, so it cannot be used to identify a specific publishing era. Please fix this on all of your articles.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 18:37, May 8, 2014 (UTC)
    • Fixed in all relevant. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:44, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
SE
  • "at one stage between the" Can you reword this a bit? Saying at one stage reads a bit odd to me. Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:31, May 12, 2014 (UTC)
    • yeah it does sound a bit off, but I cannot for the life of me think of a better way to say it :S Any suggestions? Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:49, May 17, 2014 (UTC)
      • Maybe "At one point". Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:10, May 22, 2014 (UTC)
        • Oh I thought you'd have issues with that for the same reason! Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:39, May 22, 2014 (UTC)
          • I would use "At some point" since "At one point" kind of indicates a single instance in time.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 15:59, May 22, 2014 (UTC)
            • Changed in all relevant. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:26, May 22, 2014 (UTC)

Comments