Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Hez's squad

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Hez's squad

• Nominated by: TK-462 (talk) 00:36, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 11:50, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
2. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:08, May 2, 2020 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 18:54, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
4. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:29, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
5. Sitting at 248 words. Good job! Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 22:22, May 3, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Zed

• Sub-bullets in infoboxes should only be listed to a depth of one, meaning that Grand Army of the Republic should be omitted.
• The bolded title in the article text should not contain any links.
• The article body has a length of 151 words, underneath the 165-word limit for sectioning described in rule 12. As such, the sectioning should be removed. Zed42 (talk) 08:24, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed the above. TK-462 (talk) 16:24, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
    • Since it appears there's too much information for an unsectioned body to be under 165 words, I recommend you try implement the sectioning again, following Spooky's advice below.
      • Done. TK-462 (talk) 01:47, April 29, 2020 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• As with Crys, the name of the planet doesn't need to be sourced to something other than the novel. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:57, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
• I checked that Encyclopedia entry and it doesn't say Teth is located in the Outer Rim, you'll need to use another valid source. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:05, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed both. TK-462 (talk) 01:30, April 28, 2020 (UTC)

Spooky

• In the body, 22 BBY should use the dating reference that is in the infobox.
• With the recent fiddling, it appears you're sitting at 179 words in the body. Tucking a Description section in would be nice, and might help you keep above the limit once it's also got the History section in place.—spookywilloww^talk 17:00, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed both. TK-462 (talk) 00:24, April 29, 2020 (UTC)
• The bolded words in the intro should not contain links.
• I'm fairly sure the date is unnecessary in the Description section.—spookywilloww^talk 00:40, April 29, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. TK-462 (talk) 01:06, April 29, 2020 (UTC)

Vitus

• In the infobox, squad should be in the formation type parameter while infantry should be in the military type parameter.
• It would be better to state rescue instead of capture in the first paragraph when referring to their actions with Rotta.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 04:47, April 28, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed both. TK-462 (talk) 00:24, April 29, 2020 (UTC)

Fan

• "Infantry" is infobox-exclusive.Fan26 (Talk) 17:58, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added to description. TK-462 (talk) 18:21, May 3, 2020 (UTC)

Tommy

• Harsh as it may be to object to this so when the nom is so close, I must nonetheless ask for more detail in the intro. Battle of Teth needs context, I'd like the fact the squad were all killed, who they fought against, etc. Sadly this will undoubtedly push the article over the 250 limit. Tommy-Macaroni 20:16, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
  • Will do. TK-462 (talk) 23:10, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• Word count will go over the limit once I add in the requested information. EC can fail the nomination whenever you get a chance. TK-462 (talk) 23:08, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
  • Archiving per user request. Tommy-Macaroni 11:16, May 9, 2020 (UTC)