Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Henna

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Henna

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:45, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The partner of Cidri

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 11:08, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
2. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:01, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
3. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 12:23, April 25, 2014 (UTC)
4. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:54, April 25, 2014 (UTC)
5. Cade Calrayn 16:56, May 3, 2014 (UTC)

Object

501st

• Same objection as the one for Henna's partner.
  • Changed to floated. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:58, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
    • Gas giants such as Bespin don't have surfaces, so you might want to change that. :P
• "Henna was a Bothan jeweler who ran the jewellery company Bothawui.... and the pair ran the jewellery business together out of a weathered..." It's repitive that you twice state that he/she/it ran the company. Change it so that you only mention it once.
  • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:58, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
    • Well... now there is no mention that both the Bothans ran the shop together, like in Cidri's article. It would be nice if you could find a way to do that. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:04, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
      • Any better? Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:48, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
• Unidentified/Undefined gender category is needed. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:58, April 21, 2014 (UTC)
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:58, April 22, 2014 (UTC)

Cadeth

• jewelry is the proper American English spelling.
  • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:48, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
• Same objection about clarified as Cindri. Cade Calrayn 04:05, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:48, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

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