Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Handon Guld's wife

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Handon Guld's wife

• Nominated by: ImpacticForce (Talk) 05:09, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another <character>'s <family member>
• WookieeProject (optional):WP:KOTOR

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Support

1. —spookywilloww^talk 21:30, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:37, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
3. — Samonic 18:08, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
4. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:18, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:07, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

Spooky

• "admitted his knowledge of the affair." affair as in the murder ordeal or the cheating incident? It's unclear which event this refers to in prose, without looking at the quote.
• From briefly glancing at other articles, it seems like some sort of year range can be established easily enough for Jedi Civil War.
• BtS: Possible slight context for Ordo? Seemed random to mention him, unclear of his relevance to this all.
• Missing referencing in the first paragraph of this—normally I'd copy-edit it in, but not sure if all of it's to one source or the other.—spookywilloww^talk 06:13, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Addressed all. Let me know if the part about Ordo needs tweaking. ImpacticForce (He/Him Talk) 17:07, 5 April 2022 (UTC)

Luca

• I know it has already been discussed with Spooky, but I think that some context like "Mandalorian Canderous Ordo" would be nice.
• Make sure to be ok with my copy-edit. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:24, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Added, thanks for catching that stuff. ImpacticForce (He/Him Talk) 15:41, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:29, 15 April 2022 (UTC)