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Handon Guld's wife
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ImpacticForce (Talk) 05:09, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Another <character>'s <family member>
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Support
- —spookywillowwtalk 21:30, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:37, 7 April 2022 (UTC)- — Samonic
18:08, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
- LucaRoR
(Talk) 19:18, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:07, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
Object
Spooky
"admitted his knowledge of the affair." affair as in the murder ordeal or the cheating incident? It's unclear which event this refers to in prose, without looking at the quote.From briefly glancing at other articles, it seems like some sort of year range can be established easily enough for Jedi Civil War.BtS: Possible slight context for Ordo? Seemed random to mention him, unclear of his relevance to this all.Missing referencing in the first paragraph of this—normally I'd copy-edit it in, but not sure if all of it's to one source or the other.—spookywillowwtalk 06:13, 5 April 2022 (UTC)- Addressed all. Let me know if the part about Ordo needs tweaking.
ImpacticForce (He/Him Talk) 17:07, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
- Addressed all. Let me know if the part about Ordo needs tweaking.
Luca
I know it has already been discussed with Spooky, but I think that some context like "Mandalorian Canderous Ordo" would be nice.Make sure to be ok with my copy-edit.LucaRoR
(Talk) 05:24, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
- Added, thanks for catching that stuff.
ImpacticForce (He/Him Talk) 15:41, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
- Added, thanks for catching that stuff.
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:29, 15 April 2022 (UTC)