Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Hale Return

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Hale Return

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 02:22, April 21, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I'm not using the planet field for the infobox, as that means it was in orbit of Borosk, which is not confirmed. Also, I'm not filling out the battle field as this is never said to take actual part in the battle.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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  1. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 14:02, May 16, 2015 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 01:57, May 18, 2015 (UTC)
  3. Manoof (talk) 08:30, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:53, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

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Exiled Jedi
  • The article gives the impression that the platform was always near Borosk. Unless the novel clearly states that it was a completely stationary platform, I think you should alter the article to state the time that the platform is confirmed to be there. It could easily be a mobile platform that the Remnant brings to battlefields.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 13:35, May 9, 2015 (UTC)
    • TCSWE's entry has the Hale Return "stationed near the planet Borosk during the Yuuzhan Vong War." By that wording, it's unclear if it was stationed there for the entirety of the war, or only during a period of the war. 501st dogma(talk) 13:52, May 9, 2015 (UTC)
      • The way the article is currently written it makes it sound like the platform was located near Borosk during the entirety of the war.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 13:21, May 16, 2015 (UTC)
        • Yes, but that is how TCSWE has it too. I'm using pretty much the same wording, expect "stationed" is switched out for "positioned." 501st dogma(talk) 13:48, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

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