Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Haash'n

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Haash'n

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 23:26, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First Mon Calamari nom! (Thanks to Hanzo for some pre-nom help.)

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Hanzo
  • Please make a link and give initial context for Home One (class of Star Cruiser), and also reorder the behind the scenes to mention his being played by a female extra in the film instead of jumping around with discussing film, then CCG, then film again. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:30, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Coming to think of it, also discuss the behind the scenes of the filming before the CCG too. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:31, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Only the CCG mentions his being a master engineer, with his being "known for his skills as an engineer" being the only text in the CSWE, which is also new info that's not reflected in the article. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:29, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
  • I feel like I should have cross-referenced the entirety of his CSWE entry and this article before posting my initial objection, as I now have an addendum for the fact that only the CCG mentions that he joined the Alliance to fulfill that dream of piloting a star cruiser, with the CSWE not making them obviously connected at all. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:33, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Context needed for all the characters namedropped in the article. Should specify that Ackbar, Madine and Mothma are all Alliance leadership officials, and specify that Mothma's the Supreme Commander. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:46, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • (Reviewing note) Please ensure that {{WebCite}} references follow the instructions on that template page.
  • It would be more accurate to replace "Forest Moon of Endor" with "Endor system."
  • "While scenes during the Battle of Endor were directed by Star Wars creator George Lucas," This part is unnecessary. Also, the next line is missing a link to Death Star. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 10:03, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
    • Both fixed. I think that was left over from when I thought he appeared in the Battle of Endor scenes on Home One. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 17:10, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Is there a reason for mentioning Ackbar, Mon Mothma, and Crix Madine in that order?
    • That is the order they spoke in.
  • Since most rebels were sat opposite to the rebel leaders in the room, the article should mention that Haash'n was one of several rebels who stood behind Mon Mothma and the others during the briefing. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 07:30, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
  • The article should also describe Haash'n's attire instead of simply saying that it was similar to what was worn by other Mon Calamari. You can say that, but you should still give a brief description of the uniform. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 07:36, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I feel like the article would be remiss without giving some kind of context to the Battle of Endor by mentioning the Death Star in some manner -- that's the whole point of why they're there in the first place, after all. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:25, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
    • Reworded the sentence about the briefing to focus on the intent of the battle. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 19:41, 12 March 2021 (UTC)

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